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TFHLv62yr
2022-10-18 11:21

Well.... the start was good. the grammar is good, the wincêst is good and there is scathach too. MC basically has a cheat system that grants him gacha tickets from ALL over the OMNIVERSE. THis is based on Doulou Dalu 2... until here is good, but then mc thanks to the cheat system, gets sooooooo many skills and abilities that's its takes more brain to understand his huge status windows than to read the chapter. MC reincarnates at 6. and as of chapter 42, he is 10 and has a literal empire in a NEW Continnent that's only 1600 km away (LOL). Has almost a dozen level 90 subordinates, a cult over 50.000 members of 100% girls under his name. Has 3 martial spirits with 2 of them being already a cheat on their own.... So yeah... its kinda boring read chapters that 30% are powerups.

My Power is Upgrading Everything (Rewrite)

Nine_Clouds
4.8
379 Chs

Liked by 78 people

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Valstrax_Nyaa
Valstrax_NyaaLv1

Well, it's better than most trashy fanfic and the development arc is better with explanation. There is literally short arc about Dragon Nest lol. It's not like they appear out of nowhere. Also your number off my friend and you didn't read the tags?

2yr
13
Spam_Destroyer
Spam_DestroyerLv1

Um, what?? Reading your previous review, makes me think you hate the mc's organization explosive growth. Just be honest and saya you wanted segs chapter bro.

2yr
8
jinmorifan_2
jinmorifan_2Lv4

It's a gacha systerm, were you expecting weak to strong? At this point, the author should have probably made it clear from his prev two works that he's going to make an organization, also do you think the mc doesn't grind tickets in mean time background

2yr
4
please_be_gentle_
please_be_gentle_Lv4

From how the things are going his enemies are going to be tang san and his friends (protagonists from doulou dalu 1) and the whole divine realm filled with 4th and 5th dimentional beings so this power up is too little compared to enemies he's going to fight in the future.

1yr
5
Slandered_man
Slandered_manLv4

Is there yuri in it bro ?

1yr
DaoistatnnJf
DaoistatnnJfLv13

chapter 197 has some l1cking dunno how it is after that since I dropped this, most likely his mothers teacher is bi sexual as is 2 of MCs spirits

Slandered_man:Is there yuri in it bro ?
1yr
6
Slandered_man
Slandered_manLv4

Thanks bro This saved me

DaoistatnnJf:chapter 197 has some l1cking dunno how it is after that since I dropped this, most likely his mothers teacher is bi sexual as is 2 of MCs spirits
1yr
2
Worldtuner
WorldtunerLv4

1yr
FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

Thanks

DaoistatnnJf:chapter 197 has some l1cking dunno how it is after that since I dropped this, most likely his mothers teacher is bi sexual as is 2 of MCs spirits
1yr
4
Ireallylikereading
IreallylikereadingLv4

thanks dude, finally got convinced to drop

DaoistatnnJf:chapter 197 has some l1cking dunno how it is after that since I dropped this, most likely his mothers teacher is bi sexual as is 2 of MCs spirits
1yr
3
Shashwat_Singh_0989
Shashwat_Singh_0989Lv13

huh why are you guys so insecure ? how do u expect two women to not touch each other when you are literally in a threesome

DaoistatnnJf:chapter 197 has some l1cking dunno how it is after that since I dropped this, most likely his mothers teacher is bi sexual as is 2 of MCs spirits
6mth
jinmorifan_2
jinmorifan_2Lv4

I don't expect a cuck to understand

Shashwat_Singh_0989:huh why are you guys so insecure ? how do u expect two women to not touch each other when you are literally in a threesome
4mth
1
FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

lol'd, bro replied but it got deleted

jinmorifan_2:I don't expect a cuck to understand
4mth
Shashwat_Singh_0989
Shashwat_Singh_0989Lv13

Thanks man ....finally someone who is not insecure enough to actually show what happened

FinnsRevenge:lol'd, bro replied but it got deleted
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3mth
FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

No problem, I'm against censorship even if I disagree with you vehemently. WN's auto deletion of certain buzz words is draconian

Shashwat_Singh_0989:Thanks man ....finally someone who is not insecure enough to actually show what happened
3mth
1
Other Reviews
LyCifer
LyCiferLv3

I havent found much of Douluo Dalu 2 fanfic. it doesn't get enough attention as other because the last part of the story is butchered mercilessly. i hope you give us fresh and entertaining story that's better than the original. And the chapters so far have been very nice to read.

2yr

Venerable_Adam
Venerable_AdamLv4

i hope you back for good i enjoyed your work i was wandering if you ever gonna make a "Katekyo hitman reborn" fanfiction i hope you do cause i love your writing and "Katekyo hitman reborn" is my favorite story

2yr
Melshan
MelshanLv7

HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM

2yr
DaoistjcJwtW
DaoistjcJwtWLv1

Sería Interesante si le das protagonista el legado del dios dragón o la reencarnación del dios dragón o la línea de sangre del dios dragón????????

2yr
Aditya_0814
Aditya_0814Lv12

well why there are no negative reviews...well whatever. work is great , op MC and harem well its all go I guess.but why he is giving his mother so much attention I don't hate but for some reason I can't connect with her other harem members are more likeable to me I mean she is doing nothing but still she got all the benefits and became most powerful , management is done by someone else , training is done by someone else , work where required power is done by MC ,why is she there if she is why she got best of all things I mean just act spoiled all day and even her love is made up of illusion she was yandere for his father but after mind wash by illusion she got hota for MC. Her love is real or not i don't even know. why did she become the main wife. also the character of MC is confusing the author shows MC love his harem so much but if he gets serious on side he starts complicating things like in one chapter when matter of wife comes he indesively dodge the topic why did he do that I mean he sleep with them he love them but why he can't accept them what is he a Playboy .....all other things are great I guess...nothing to complain.

8mth
Stiven_Callejas
Stiven_CallejasLv2

this is much better than the previous one, keep it up author by the way tries to slow down the advance of strength of the MC in the previous one this was very exaggerated and ruined the story a lot, also you can be patient in delivering things to your mother

2yr
MaBoySpicyChicken
MaBoySpicyChickenLv2

The rewrite version has been better so far. I haven't noticed any problem and enjoyed it so much. Thanks for another wonderful fanfic, Nineclouds! You're one of the best!

2yr
InnerVoice
InnerVoiceLv6

I love reading doluo dalu but like they need to fkin focus on one story at a time like fr. Doluo dalu 1 isn’t even finished yet and theres already like doluo dalu 2,3,4,5 each with dozens to hundreds of chapters. They need to chill tf out. Anyways I love doluo dalu 1 and 2

1yr
ekatn
ekatnLv4

I was thinking of giving this novel a 4* but after chapter 10 you won all 5, ........now give us what we want, you know what it is. ps: I would like to ask you not to make the mc very dense in things related to romance it becomes heavy to read.

2yr
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