Item: Herald of Steel
Rating: 1.6
Author: Frozentech

FrozentechLv111yr

2023-04-30 02:38

The story is getting worse as the time goes by. Here are the idiotic things i have read so far. On the spot finger printing and checking without magnifying glass.. now thats got to be one of the most inefficient way to validate a person identity trying to enter and secured area. The Author just spent 13 chapters explaining how his brothel works. Author would sometimes spend 3 - 4 chapters on sexy time but spends 1 chapter on a battles that supposed to have happened in days.

Herald of Steel

FerriticMatrix

4.3

1515 Chs

Liked by 92 people

Replies4

KatsunanLv2

Exactly what i thought lol

1yr

DaoistSLWwmkLv13

Thanks you sir for saving my time!

1yr

Jarno_VdkolkLv12

Honestly I think the author changed. The change and mentions in regards of the whole " morality " stuff also can't be compared to earlier chapters. I think the old author/writer didn't meet deadlines or something and that there's a new one on herald of steel now. Either way, The story is currently just being milked. I'm no longer supporting the work or paying coins to read it on webnovel.

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Suk_min_TakLv3

mc own a brothel, I am oute here.

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Jarno_VdkolkLv12

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