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How many readers do you think dropped this story because of this extra-long flashback? Theres like over 20 chapters of useless chapters. The flashback if too long... We don't care about the story of the past since that already failed. Flashbacks are ok if there only 3 - 5 chapters only.. But 20 chapters of continuous chapters. Its a shame this was one of the stories I read every day.. But now... I don't even care about the release. I'm just waiting for the story to comeback to the current timeline.
I hate this entire rise and fall arc. They taking thier sweet time discussing stuff that does not have any meaning to the current timeline. We dont care about Leonards plans in the past. What i want to know is how is this man that is watching the MC memories.. that is more interesting. Please go back to the current time line.
I gave this story another chance but.. I'm still getting hung up with how Blackout gets their information or their funding. The kingdom they belong to just lost in a war.. But they dont still have money to try funding a economic sabotage? And how come they move so fast? They can get information so fast? They even have the same level of technology with the MC now. Blackout is just too OP.
Menes is the stupidest General I have ever read. He cant keep his army organized. They already made that same mistake while taking Theseli but makes the same mistake again when they fought Perseus. Then another stupid thing is trusting Manuk. He even gave them horses. Horses that are so important in the war. This is the second time he is giving away military supplies. Why are all of Alexander Generals so inept? They were mercenaries for thier entire adult life right? Didnt they learn anything?
I dont get it. Didnt he increase the security in the city because of all the spies? He even made sure the mana cystal mine is tighly monitored. But in just a couple of chapters somebody already manage to smuggy somthing out? And all he needed to do is to hide it in his boots? And what with this blackout agant still being there. Is the country integence that bad?
A secret noble living in the city got his slave to talk with the enemy commander. And gave them a way in? - How? Its a siege. Theres even a curfew. That means nobody is in and nobody goes out. How did the slave go out? Didnt they say guards are getting executed for sleeping on the job? That means a lot of guards are now afraid to sleep on the job so they are guarding the city strictly. Then how did this super slave leave the city and also come back? And how lucky of Alex that the enemy got lost during the attack and hit the wrong target.
I stopped reading this hoping to binge read several chapters for the Zanzan war start to end and up to recovery. I'm just sad.. Too many chapters had no effect on the main story. 8 Chapters on sexy time. 4 Chapters on how Mikaya is getting used. I just wish the Author would stop writing about sexy time that does not contribute to the story. You don't need to spend 4 chapters on sexy time. Just say they missed each other so much that they spent the whole night making love. You don't need 4 chapters describing how they made love. Thats just a waste of chapters.
HI, Can somebody spoil me? What happens in the war against Tibias? Does Zanzan fall to Tibias? Does Alexander come back to a broken city? or will they Win? 1. How come the royals are so optimistic about the war? In the previous chapters, they were so pessimistic about Zanzan chances when the coalition attacked them. Now they keep on saying Zanzan will survive when they already lost once.
Couldnt get pass chapter 1. Too much description of how the lady looked like. It's like the Author is a teenager trying to find a way to project his fantasy. I skip chapter 1 hoping the real story begins in chapter 2 only to be treated with another smut scene with a maid. I will try to get pass chapter 2 and hopefully the real story begin at chapter 3.