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Review Detail of Gregar in WHAT IF I BECOME THE ENEMY

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Gregar
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Wow what a poorly written plot that makes no sense and it just keeps on going and going. This guy can't keep his facial expressions normal which makes the prince think he knows more then possible which is the case and he talks out loud things he shouldn't, he is one of very very few that can warp so he should be valuable to them but he's being treated as a small fry little boy later they see the value but in the beginning when its revealed he still gets pushed around. And again he can warp so he can go where he pleases mostly as long he has seen it so why is he so scared and insist on staying???? He even said himself he liked to get fired so staying isn't so important. I get that he won't flee without reason but the current situation where the captain wants his life and now gets sent to the mine. And the others aren't afraid he just dips out? Reading till this point has been incredibly frustrating and on top of that the grammar is poor, most likely mtl

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WHAT IF I BECOME THE ENEMY

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HaracasAye
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Ty for saving my time.