Yay

Was expecting her to become a loyal, docile hound of ansel but I guess not or not for a long long time. It feels like we're back to square 1 with her except she's more lonely and has experienced growth. Curious what will happen and hoping the effort and manipulation expended in all the chapters till now won't be wasted.

Writing quality is fine and atleast comparable to other popular works on this website. Updating speed is surprisingly fast since each chapter is rather long compared to other novels so very good. Story is good for people who don't care much about fighting scenes and more about the characters and the manipulation the mc does. A summary of what to expect is that the mc devoured someone who is aware of the future plot. Now he knows how he meets his end but also who will rise up and become formidable opponents in the future. The strongest one is the focus sofar and she gets manipulated, gaslighted(?), dominated etc etc all for a single reason. To become a loyal hound for the mc. Sofar it hasn't been completed so expect a slower take on it. The mc seems to be powerfull with great status so don't expect hardships or betrayal. World building it is there sorta but not much focus on it but what was told was interesting. A nice story for people who like seeing someone potentially strong, willfull and pretty mentally challenged(mostly because of effect of the heroine fate) get manipulated and their pride broken to become molded to the mc's liking.

Wow what a poorly written plot that makes no sense and it just keeps on going and going. This guy can't keep his facial expressions normal which makes the prince think he knows more then possible which is the case and he talks out loud things he shouldn't, he is one of very very few that can warp so he should be valuable to them but he's being treated as a small fry little boy later they see the value but in the beginning when its revealed he still gets pushed around. And again he can warp so he can go where he pleases mostly as long he has seen it so why is he so scared and insist on staying???? He even said himself he liked to get fired so staying isn't so important. I get that he won't flee without reason but the current situation where the captain wants his life and now gets sent to the mine. And the others aren't afraid he just dips out? Reading till this point has been incredibly frustrating and on top of that the grammar is poor, most likely mtl

Wow what a poorly written plot that makes no sense and it just keeps on going and going. This guy can't keep his facial expressions normal, he is one of very very few that can warp so he should be valuable to them but he's being treated as a small fry little boy. And again he can warp so he can go where he pleases mostly so why is he so scared and insist on staying???? He even said himself he liked to get fired so staying isn't so important. I get that he won't flee without reason but the current situation where the captain wants his life and now gets sent to the mine. And the others aren't afraid he just dips out? Reading till this point has been incredibly frustrating and on top of that the grammar is poor, most likely mtl

This 'Leylin' is quite weird lately not gonna lie. His face changes so much like hes in a fotoshoot taking different posses. Seems so different, no calmness or quick transitioning of emotions. 'Cold' or frosty looks aswell feel weird since before or after his expression goes to 'changed dramatically' or 'tragically'. Is it right to assume that this 'Leylin' is no longer the wmw 'Leylin' and has transformed into a original character?

Better

One time thing. Let's see if hes true to his word

Ugh please have mercy sir.

Im starting to dread whenever i read trainning or 11pm lol

It keeps going back to the girl and saying she's his girlfriend and then getting messages from her like shes from a scam company wanting your money aggressively.

I see that there were hints that she has a past. But was honestly expecting the mc judging from his annoyance and moments of wisdom to have dealt with it already one way or another.

This character is like adding liquid fecal matter to a good pasta dish. Makes me go like ??? why add it.

Fast

pass

What is this? a low constitution non battle mage not engaging in close-up combat and instead use ranged attacks to kill or atleast reduce the hp of the enemy. Those snakes seem really useful, wonder if they can get strong enough to cause a cave to collapse for killing, escaping or to hide evidence.

A very fun fight to read. Was expecting the formula of: mc begins adventure > encounters enemy > fight and barely win or escape while gravely injured > sighs at his inexperience or weakness from some mistake he made. This formula wouldn't be bad per se (it gets used for a reason I guess) but I prefer what you did with this fight. Testing the waters and prepping, followed by swiftly going for kill. Nice and clean.

Happy to have read the novel and congratulations!!! Also satisfied with the ending. Looking forward to the other novels especially Blood mage.

Have read stories before with heroes in it and they make them pretty much unkillable and tenacious even with preparation and impossible odds. Even when young they are favored by heaven and will be saved regardless of the situation with luck, even when the mc tries to kill or enslave them. Very good to read that line about the explosive dagger and that even they would die. Also perk cards and advancement skip cards these gave me Legendary mechanic vibes, which is a very nice surprise. Hmm this girl as has been shown she's hero material and cared for others plus strong willed. Yeah might be tough to make her his loyal (hidden?) dagger but luckily she's still young and has not reached the point of old npc cunning . Atleast making her useful should be doable.

Looking forward to it.