Review Detail of Azazel_0919 in BTTH Life Simulator System
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-Writing Quality: ⭐⭐. It looks like a translation so logically it does not have very good writing quality. There are dozens of grammatical, syntax, cohesive, cohesive errors, redundancies, explanations, digressions, etcetera etcetera, in each chapter. So if you are not used to burning your eyesight, stop this story right now. -Updating Stability:⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐. This aspect is inconsequential so naturally it has the highest score. No one checks stability except a diehard fan which for the quality of this work seems unlikely to have any real following. -Story Development:⭐⭐. It is quite good at the beginning of the work, first 100 chapters, the mc concentrates on himself and has a personality consistent with his situation. However, later in the work he becomes a softie and starts to concentrate on the development of the secondary characters, i.e. his harem, thus creating the feeling that there is no story development for the main character anymore. The mc stagnates and seems to have a rather severe nerf from the author, at least it is noticeable at first glance with respect to the fmc, who with a single lower celestial flame reaches the status of duo emperor at once. That is, the author wants his harem to be useful and throws away the plot coherence he had built with so much effort, giving more and more absurd justifications, hence my low score. -Character Design:⭐⭐⭐⭐. The characters are very well written and partially match the world of the original work. Some are completely oc, though it is inferred that this is because of the mc's intervention. It doesn't have the highest score here because it mixes manhua, novel and dongha design which is unacceptable in my opinion, you either use one or use the other. -World background:⭐⭐⭐⭐. It is very well detailed, especially since the author knows how to write from multiple points of view in third person. Unfortunately the quality of the writing leaves much to be desired. -Conclusion: 3'4⭐. Has a lot of room for improvement from a grammatical, syntactical and plot point of view. Readable if you're used to convoluted reads, it's not a bad work. Although honestly, the personality of the mc leaves a lot to be desired from chapter 170 onwards. Thanks for the story.
BTTH Life Simulator System
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can you shut up if you don't like it stop reading it there is already enough shit on webnovel as it is if you want to show yor critique do it somewhere else don't mess some thing which people actually enjoy
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Imagine being so resentful as to use multiple accounts to give at least 10 likes to your own review. -On the Quality of Writing: It's completely subjective, and there seems to be resentment from this person, so I won't comment much on their rating. Instead, I'll emphasize that the writing quality improves markedly as the story progresses. The only reason I don't edit the first few chapters is so that readers can enjoy the comments left in the paragraphs. Regarding redundancy, this could be an issue in the first 50 chapters, which can be a bit slow. If you've read BTTH before, it might seem redundant, but if you haven't read the original story, it will be quite useful. -Nothing to comment on. -This is entirely subjective on the part of the reviewer. The MC's development is much greater after 100 chapters, and he goes from being a very lonely person to having companions for whom he cares, just as he does for his Master. His decisions are logical, and the chapters where this person claims the MC becomes a "secondary character" are a few chapters where there is some development of his female companions. -The MC's partner increases her cultivation rapidly, and this is perfectly justified in the story. Even in the canon, the girl, despite cultivating many years later, manages to raise her cultivation to a higher level than the protagonist of the original story for a short period of time. This is how her physique works, and there are even more broken bloodlines. This person simply does not like other characters to have even the slightest relevance over the MC, even if it is his partner. -Manhwa designs are used for all characters except Zi Yan, who doesn't use any of the three. PS: Your review is manipulated with many likes. I'm leaving it up to explain some points a little more, and to deter people who share the same views from reading this story.
Kisshot:Imagine being so resentful as to use multiple accounts to give at least 10 likes to your own review. -On the Quality of Writing: It's completely subjective, and there seems to be resentment from this person, so I won't comment much on their rating. Instead, I'll emphasize that the writing quality improves markedly as the story progresses. The only reason I don't edit the first few chapters is so that readers can enjoy the comments left in the paragraphs. Regarding redundancy, this could be an issue in the first 50 chapters, which can be a bit slow. If you've read BTTH before, it might seem redundant, but if you haven't read the original story, it will be quite useful. -Nothing to comment on. -This is entirely subjective on the part of the reviewer. The MC's development is much greater after 100 chapters, and he goes from being a very lonely person to having companions for whom he cares, just as he does for his Master. His decisions are logical, and the chapters where this person claims the MC becomes a "secondary character" are a few chapters where there is some development of his female companions. -The MC's partner increases her cultivation rapidly, and this is perfectly justified in the story. Even in the canon, the girl, despite cultivating many years later, manages to raise her cultivation to a higher level than the protagonist of the original story for a short period of time. This is how her physique works, and there are even more broken bloodlines. This person simply does not like other characters to have even the slightest relevance over the MC, even if it is his partner. -Manhwa designs are used for all characters except Zi Yan, who doesn't use any of the three. PS: Your review is manipulated with many likes. I'm leaving it up to explain some points a little more, and to deter people who share the same views from reading this story.
While i agree with u on certain point i digress with some things that will reach the conclusion on the end of journey, and while this azzazel had some arguably bad point(where he review with too much passion and different reader have different reasons to hook up in story so this is subjective) it's up to u author to take criticism/or not, i hope u will keep writing and be better each time u write new story/chapter ganbare!!!
Kisshot:Imagine being so resentful as to use multiple accounts to give at least 10 likes to your own review. -On the Quality of Writing: It's completely subjective, and there seems to be resentment from this person, so I won't comment much on their rating. Instead, I'll emphasize that the writing quality improves markedly as the story progresses. The only reason I don't edit the first few chapters is so that readers can enjoy the comments left in the paragraphs. Regarding redundancy, this could be an issue in the first 50 chapters, which can be a bit slow. If you've read BTTH before, it might seem redundant, but if you haven't read the original story, it will be quite useful. -Nothing to comment on. -This is entirely subjective on the part of the reviewer. The MC's development is much greater after 100 chapters, and he goes from being a very lonely person to having companions for whom he cares, just as he does for his Master. His decisions are logical, and the chapters where this person claims the MC becomes a "secondary character" are a few chapters where there is some development of his female companions. -The MC's partner increases her cultivation rapidly, and this is perfectly justified in the story. Even in the canon, the girl, despite cultivating many years later, manages to raise her cultivation to a higher level than the protagonist of the original story for a short period of time. This is how her physique works, and there are even more broken bloodlines. This person simply does not like other characters to have even the slightest relevance over the MC, even if it is his partner. -Manhwa designs are used for all characters except Zi Yan, who doesn't use any of the three. PS: Your review is manipulated with many likes. I'm leaving it up to explain some points a little more, and to deter people who share the same views from reading this story.
development of secondary characters is good though... it's no fun reading two-dimensional characters that are only there for decoration and xiao xi yan's drastic increase in strength has been given a proper explanation (poison body +neither poison flame that's been nurtured for who knows how long ) as for mc being nerfed I would say his simulator is not giving him rewards that inc his personal strength but it's almost like gatcha so... otherwise, he is like 14-15 and already a dou ancestor and a 7th tire alchemist..what more do you want from the guy... though I agree with inconsistent writing but it's the translation... it's still much better /easier to read than the lot out there
I find it curious, what do you mean by inconsistency in writing? In the last 30-50 chapters I have used more advanced proof-reading methods and countless revisions to each chapter. Not to contradict you, it's just a genuine doubt, since I can't come up with the answer. Or do you mean earlier chapters?
95_novel_maniac_95:development of secondary characters is good though... it's no fun reading two-dimensional characters that are only there for decoration and xiao xi yan's drastic increase in strength has been given a proper explanation (poison body +neither poison flame that's been nurtured for who knows how long ) as for mc being nerfed I would say his simulator is not giving him rewards that inc his personal strength but it's almost like gatcha so... otherwise, he is like 14-15 and already a dou ancestor and a 7th tire alchemist..what more do you want from the guy... though I agree with inconsistent writing but it's the translation... it's still much better /easier to read than the lot out there