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2022-10-22 20:53

Since there wasn't a synopsis, I had to read the chapter. A synopsis/summary is helpful so that readers know what to expect and can get in right away. It would help if you hooked the readers into something because the story is good. I've enjoyed reading the story and have even commented on the parts I like. The story has potential. Keep writing!

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