webnovel
queenet
queenetAuthor2yr
2022-10-14 00:22

a very interesting novel,it revolves round characters growth,with its pot twist,suspense ,comedy , betrayal and revenge. you don't wanna miss this

Helplessly In Love (Will be Republished)

queenet
Not enough ratings
15 Chs

Liked by 1 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
Purple_Fantasies74
Purple_Fantasies74Lv4

This novel is very intriguing enough to be recommended in webnovel. I love your novel writing pace, skills and knowledge you are really a brilliant author.🥰🥰

2yr

Tres_Aguila
Tres_AguilaLv14

This story is both interesting and hilarious. I love the character design especially that of the female lead. She's so sweet, naive and lively. I can't wait to see how the storyline develops. Kudos to the author.

2yr
shentiments
shentimentsLv3

Since there wasn't a synopsis, I had to read the chapter. A synopsis/summary is helpful so that readers know what to expect and can get in right away. It would help if you hooked the readers into something because the story is good. I've enjoyed reading the story and have even commented on the parts I like. The story has potential. Keep writing!

2yr
Dreamerx30
Dreamerx30Lv3

Your story is interesting till the three chapters. As it is not too to know about the story. I will tell you to update more and as your book is on MC POV "i" by itself refers to a person so it should be capitalized. By the way, your writing is good don't be demotivate. Keep writing 💓 Wishing you best of luck!!

2yr
Priminies
PriminiesLv1

Carmen is so cute and adorable.. But i hope can be more attractive to the story from the blurb.. Everyone need to know about Carmen's charm.. I cant wait for next chapter..

2yr
Rin_Nurnia
Rin_NurniaLv4

For the first chapter, there are some things I want to suggest to you. Firstly, it would be better if you use the 'I' pronounce in capital letter. Secondly, using comma and full stop at the end of the dialogues

2yr
Related Stories

Not Just A Kiss

"I have this strong urge to kiss you." he said as his eyes flicked to my lips and then back to my eyes. I felt my heartbeat increasing and my knees were starting to feel weak by his closeness. I wet my lips, "Uh...no one is around. There is no need." I said through the lump in my throat. "I know, but I just want to." he said as he crashed his lips to mine. ~~~~~~ Emily Samuels was devastated when she found her boyfriend of a year cheating on her. She was angry and hurt that she swore she would never forgive him. Logan has apologised to her and said it was a mistake, but Emily did not want to hear it. She also turned him down when he begged for her back. Logan's plea for her has gotten consistent that Emily wanted him to stop, so she did something that she hadn't expected to do... She kissed the school's player and heartthrob; Tyler King. She only did that to let Logan see that she has moved on. Tyler, on the other hand, got an idea, so he strike a deal with Emily - To pretend that they were dating. Spending a lot of time with the player has allowed Emily to see the real Tyler. Would their fake-dating be just that; fake? Or would it turn out to be real?

Kadene · Teen
Not enough ratings
68 Chs

My Sexy Nerd Roommate

Ashley was always into hot boys in her hometown. But this nerd guy made her heart beats fast, and made her blush like an innocent girl. His glaring just made her panties wet. “Y-you like me?” Uno’s golden gaze locked with my green one. It was like he was scanning me. my gaze travelled to his kissable lips. “Isn’t it obvious?” I smiled playfully. “But—“ I looked back at his eyes “I know you want me too Uno. That—“ I pointed to his boner, “proves it. You got it when I sat on your lap. I want you to touch me, feel me, kiss me Uno, and I’m sure as hell that you want it.” Before I could stop myself, my hand went to his trousers and squeezed him over his sweatpants. His thickness shocked me. “Oh fuck!” he groaned as my hand squeezed him. I wanted his manhood in me as soon as possible or I’d go crazy. Uno looked at me, lips parted. His gaze roamed all over my body. My face, my neck, breasts, legs, everywhere. I could see the inner beast in him wanting to break open the fucking cage and pounced out to ravish me. I could see the battle he was fighting in his eyes. I leaned forward and whispered into his ear softly. “Let it go, Uno.” Suddenly out of nowhere, it’s like something snapped in him and Uno pushed me down on the couch and crashed my lips to his.

Sakura's diamonds · Teen
Not enough ratings
183 Chs

Xavier’s girl

I heard the door opening. "I'm fine Stephanie," I said thinking she was the one that followed me. "It cute you think my sister cares" I hear Alan voice "What are you doing here," I asked him annoyed "Oh just doing someone a favour," he said as Xavier walked in behind him. I was alarmed as to why they were both here "what do you want" I asked both of them getting up. "You're in my room," Xavier said as he locked the door behind him. Making me more alarmed. "I'm sorry I didn't know, I can leave, " I said not wanting to anger him. I made my way to the door but Alan grabbed me "not so fast sweetheart" he said holding my arm. "Please let me go" I begged them. I didn't know what they were planning but I knew they were up to something. "Why would we do that" Xavier said walking to me and stroking my collarbone making me shiver. Vanessa morales just moved to town. Shy, smart and quiet girl planned to spend most of her high school life hidden. But some how ended up at the cheerleader tryouts and the school bad boy blackmailing her. She tired her best to stay away from him but he wasn't letting her go. She didn't know he had plans for her. He has been waiting for this days for years, waiting for her to return. Of course she didn't remember him (he never forgot her), that didn't bother him cause he knew she belonged to him. He would do anything to make her stay this time. One party and her life is ruined. Warning: This book is provocative. It will not be for everyone. If you are a reader with certain triggers or sensitivities common to the dark romance genres this book is not for you.

cluelessgixl · Teen
4.4
68 Chs

My sexy greek god matchmaker

I look up and see Daniel idiot Collins smirking down at me. “ you just purposely stepped into my way didn't you? ” I ask him glaring pointedly at him. “ uh huh ” he replies smiling that stupid smile of his that sometimes makes certain girls swoon. Even if I have to admit that his green eyes shining brightly as he smiles is cute, I have no plans of swooning. I intensify my glare and sigh, then step back. “ I simply do not have time to play your childish games with you Danny. So run along. ” I flip my hair and try pushing him out of the way but he grabs my hands and pulls me closer to him. I can't help but shiver when I feel his breathe caress my cheek as he leans in to whisper to me. “ don't you want me to pass on your kisses to Jonas? ” I push away from him as he laughs in that loud boisterous way that always attracts attention. I turn red both from what he said and the people staring at us with curiosity. I flee from him wanting to escape the scene when a thought registers in my mind. What if Daniel is the matchmaker I need? Veronica Saunders, brainy, beautiful, bold and rash. After a difficult childhood with a disinterested father and dead mother, she longs for someone to love her to fill in those missing gaps. And she's decided that the handsome playboy/school sweetheart Jonas Hendricks is the man for her. What happens when she has to go through her arch nemesis and the one guy who just won't bow down to her demands? But most importantly what if Daniel collins is more than the matchmaker she needs? #hot steamy romance on the way please note that the cover does not belong to me. *** Please support this author and check out my other books * Burning Hatred: Entwined Destinies ( it's a fantasy romance which I'm using to compete in spirity awards 2021 ) please help me with your support *Twisted Secrets Comedy, action, romance and so many more await you. Just add this to your reading list, t

Myst3ryqueentory · Teen
4.8
37 Chs

I'M IN LOVE WITH THE SCHOOL BULLY

In Rainbow Town, 17-years-old Ali Wilson's life takes a wild turn when her secret scrapbook, filled with tales of her and Evan, the boy she secretly loves, falls into the hands of Marcus, the school's notorious bully and a werewolf. Ali finds herself blackmailed by Marcus, who threatens to expose the contents of the scrapbook if she doesn't agree to be his servant at school. To keep her stories from being exposed, Ali reluctantly becomes Marcus's servant, only to discover a softer side to him. As feelings grow, Evan returns, throwing Ali's heart into chaos. Add in Kendra's schemes and Marcus's past love, and Ali's life becomes a supernatural soap opera. But when Ali learns she's a werewolf and her life is in danger from her own father, she must choose: flee to safety or embrace her werewolf heritage and fight for her life—and love.

Jennifer_Nzekwe · Teen
Not enough ratings
81 Chs

Joining The Beads Of Love

Chrystal Zhu is a nurse while Stephen Yang is a doctor. They both knew each other since High school Stephen Yang was rejected by Chrystal Zhu when he proposed her. In the end, both were arranged marriage which was bestowed to them by their grandparents. Let's see how their life would be __________ CHAPTER 34 Chrystal Zhu : "Let me give you a taste of how it feels to take bath with your clothes on" Stephen Yang : "Daring~… I really don't feel good taking bath with my clothes on" FL (Chrystal Zhu ): "Wait!!! Is he gonna use my soap, shower gel, and shampoo??? And my tooow… towelllll!!!" Chrystal Zhu rushed into her room with a "BANG!!!" ML (Stephen Yang): "Darling I didn't know that you love peeping while your man takes bath. It's only three minutes since I came inside for a bath, there… you are here" FL (Chrystal Zhu ): "I Made a mistake Your Highness…. I beg you to forgive me and let me go" ML (Stephen Yang): "Darling you have no way out just for the reason you kicked me" __________ LATER CHAPTERS. ML (Stephen Yang): "Chrysie~ my darling come let's do something secretive" FL (Chrystal Zhu ): "STOP calling me like that who is your darling wanna get some shots?" ML: "you want to give me an injection?" keep dreaming who do you think I am? FL: "you think I don't have a syringe?" with that Chrystal started to search around her but where did it go? ML: "are you searching for this? come here..." with a seductive to he called her showing the syringe Not knowing anything Chrystal went near him to get back the syringe but instead of getting it she got two tight spanking on her butt "Ah!!!! it hurts.... you stupid idiotic pervert" Chrystal yelled at Stephen ML: "Oh the compliment you gave me is good. Let me show you what perverts do" __________ Dear readers, VOTE and gift if you love this book. You are welcomed to put your thoughts in the chat and enjoy your journey while reading. ___________ The book cover is taken from Pinterest, I don't own it.

Honeylife_ · Teen
4.7
165 Chs
Login