At Max I would score it a 3 out of 5 but the casual disregard for the character backgrounds and their descriptions are fatally insulting. And really, is no one going to point out the horror of a grammar and senseless syntax uses. I worry for the nations and their education system's failure based on the parades of 5 star ratings raving in the review section.
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LIKEWow excuse me do you even know what Modern family is? It's a show. Which is why I went the dialogue and dash way so that my non English speaking readers can easily grasp what I am trying to say. As for grammar I admit there are mistakes but who doesn't make mistakes? I use grammarly but there isn't a perfect grammar software out there. Also you have to remember this is a fanfic not some high quality book. I am not a professional writer and I don't make money off this book. I just write as a hobby in spare time. I don't even know you. You have never commented on this book. If you feel the grammer can be changed then comment on the place you want changes. I will surely reply and try my best to help. You are not doing anyone a favor by dropping a negative review. Just annoying an author who wants to try to improve himself.
CultivatorReader:Wow excuse me do you even know what Modern family is? It's a show. Which is why I went the dialogue and dash way so that my non English speaking readers can easily grasp what I am trying to say. As for grammar I admit there are mistakes but who doesn't make mistakes? I use grammarly but there isn't a perfect grammar software out there. Also you have to remember this is a fanfic not some high quality book. I am not a professional writer and I don't make money off this book. I just write as a hobby in spare time. I don't even know you. You have never commented on this book. If you feel the grammer can be changed then comment on the place you want changes. I will surely reply and try my best to help. You are not doing anyone a favor by dropping a negative review. Just annoying an author who wants to try to improve himself.