Ummm, it felt like a machine translation. If the author takes time to edit, and uses some software or apps to fix the grammar, this will be a good story to read no doubt. But for now, it requires great patience to read it. But i hope the author will take his time to edit this. Good luck!
Liked by 9 people
LIKEToo bad I can't because I don't know much about the English language what I do or upload to this page is just to share it since I don't have time to edit it I found more than 5 or more Chinese dragon ball novels that mtl has not uploaded or translated to Yes, as a good fan of reading fanfic novels, I upload them here using the google translator
that's completely understandable. And as a writer I can understand your point. But the thing is, if you just look within your readers, many many of them will offer to edit it for you trust me. As all my editors are from the readers. Thats how we create a strong community. Anyway, good luck with your other writings friend. And hopefully i will be able to read one of your translated stories <3
Copia_San:Too bad I can't because I don't know much about the English language what I do or upload to this page is just to share it since I don't have time to edit it I found more than 5 or more Chinese dragon ball novels that mtl has not uploaded or translated to Yes, as a good fan of reading fanfic novels, I upload them here using the google translatorimage
it hurts my brain to have to reach those levels of poor grammar. Then the Chinese ffs like to throw in Chinese phases and it causes me physical mental pain
M7TH1C:Meh, If you read sh*tty translations for a long enough time, you will become immune until only the worst of the worst grammar failures will make you drop a book.