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FancyCheetah
FancyCheetahLv52yr
2022-09-26 08:07

good novel. translation is decent outside of some name/gender errors, however the grammar and sentence structure is understandable. in terms of plot, it is enjoyable. It has some novel changes to the source material and isn't a generic SI where they go undercover for half the novel.

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Gh0st00
Gh0st00Lv15

if you're translating it if you don't do it properly what's the point then my name and gender errors are kind of important

Gh0st00
Gh0st00Lv15

ruins the flow of the story

shadow_killer_222
shadow_killer_222Lv1

we aren't paying brother so let him do as he wish

Gh0st00:if you're translating it if you don't do it properly what's the point then my name and gender errors are kind of important
Neverthink
NeverthinkLv13

True, but need admit that pronouns is one of the simplest grammar in English

shadow_killer_222:we aren't paying brother so let him do as he wish
horrendous_potato
horrendous_potatoLv4

maybe it used to be, but lately pronouns have been anything but simple with people creating new ones every day.

Neverthink:True, but need admit that pronouns is one of the simplest grammar in English
soldklad
soldkladLv5

Lol

horrendous_potato:maybe it used to be, but lately pronouns have been anything but simple with people creating new ones every day.
zahra_kianpour
zahra_kianpourLv4

What is the summary ?

Ben_from_Tamilnadu
Ben_from_TamilnaduLv4

it's best hp fanfic I ever read jest translation in only problemit's all so bearable so try it or you will miss the 💎

Th3extra_7
Th3extra_7Lv4

bruh it wouldnt go as far as to say youre completely wrong about the translation, but at ch 11 there's a "except your weapon" instead of an "expelliarmus" ... and unfortunetaly occlumency and wizard chess are also translated wrongly... and i've only read 11 chapters so far.I do agree the story itself seems great so far, but translation needs some work as mtl clearly isnt enough

Yok_Sana
Yok_SanaLv4

Decent…decent what I don’t see it

Wilder6
Wilder6Lv15

Hey does anyone know the name of the fanfic where the MC stops Snape and Dumbledore from using legilimency on him by picturing gross and funny things in his mind like Dumbledore kissing Snape/Umbridge or Snape making sweet sweet love to a troll 😂. If anyone know the name lmk, it might be on fanfiction-net too. Thought it was in this one but I was wrong.

Tyler_McNeil
Tyler_McNeilLv4

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Gh0st00:if you're translating it if you don't do it properly what's the point then my name and gender errors are kind of important
gamabunda4873
gamabunda4873Lv5

by gnomebob not truly complete tho.... if u look up that way towards the end of the current chapters it kind of became like a multiversal travel thing but then they just stopped in the middle I want to say there was a nice place to end it before that so if you do read it please keep that in mind write it down in the comments or something cuz I'd love to reread until then if there's a "natural" ending I also love that shit cuz there's like an older Jade well there where thousands of reasons to like that story I still think that's my favorite story that I've ever read

Wilder6:Hey does anyone know the name of the fanfic where the MC stops Snape and Dumbledore from using legilimency on him by picturing gross and funny things in his mind like Dumbledore kissing Snape/Umbridge or Snape making sweet sweet love to a troll 😂. If anyone know the name lmk, it might be on fanfiction-net too. Thought it was in this one but I was wrong.
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gamabunda4873
gamabunda4873Lv5

though I might be completely wrong as well cuz I've read a LOT LOT LOT of FanFictions and I know there's a few of them that do that but .....that might technically not even happen in that novel

Wilder6:Hey does anyone know the name of the fanfic where the MC stops Snape and Dumbledore from using legilimency on him by picturing gross and funny things in his mind like Dumbledore kissing Snape/Umbridge or Snape making sweet sweet love to a troll 😂. If anyone know the name lmk, it might be on fanfiction-net too. Thought it was in this one but I was wrong.
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Wilder6
Wilder6Lv15

Thanks for helping me out, this was really a shot in the dark for me, so it’s great that after months I got an answer. The novel your talking about is “Harry Potter the Mutant Obscurus Gamer” right?

gamabunda4873:though I might be completely wrong as well cuz I've read a LOT LOT LOT of FanFictions and I know there's a few of them that do that but .....that might technically not even happen in that novel
gamabunda4873
gamabunda4873Lv5

ye

Wilder6:Thanks for helping me out, this was really a shot in the dark for me, so it’s great that after months I got an answer. The novel your talking about is “Harry Potter the Mutant Obscurus Gamer” right?
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