good novel. translation is decent outside of some name/gender errors, however the grammar and sentence structure is understandable. in terms of plot, it is enjoyable. It has some novel changes to the source material and isn't a generic SI where they go undercover for half the novel.
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LIKEbruh it wouldnt go as far as to say youre completely wrong about the translation, but at ch 11 there's a "except your weapon" instead of an "expelliarmus" ... and unfortunetaly occlumency and wizard chess are also translated wrongly... and i've only read 11 chapters so far.I do agree the story itself seems great so far, but translation needs some work as mtl clearly isnt enough
Hey does anyone know the name of the fanfic where the MC stops Snape and Dumbledore from using legilimency on him by picturing gross and funny things in his mind like Dumbledore kissing Snape/Umbridge or Snape making sweet sweet love to a troll 😂. If anyone know the name lmk, it might be on fanfiction-net too. Thought it was in this one but I was wrong.
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by gnomebob not truly complete tho.... if u look up that way towards the end of the current chapters it kind of became like a multiversal travel thing but then they just stopped in the middle I want to say there was a nice place to end it before that so if you do read it please keep that in mind write it down in the comments or something cuz I'd love to reread until then if there's a "natural" ending I also love that shit cuz there's like an older Jade well there where thousands of reasons to like that story I still think that's my favorite story that I've ever read
though I might be completely wrong as well cuz I've read a LOT LOT LOT of FanFictions and I know there's a few of them that do that but .....that might technically not even happen in that novel
Thanks for helping me out, this was really a shot in the dark for me, so it’s great that after months I got an answer. The novel your talking about is “Harry Potter the Mutant Obscurus Gamer” right?