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Blue_Robin
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Alright now let me start with this. I really like this novel. It has flaws, don't get me wrong, but I can look past them. Let me just get the flaws out of the way. The writing quality can be poor at times, though it usually maintains a consistent mediocrity. If I remember correctly the author is not a native english speaker, however tries his best with the aid of Grammarly. This means it's readable, but mistakes will be noticeable. The second flaw is the romance. This is a harem. Neglect play seems to be a fetish of the mc's and boy does he not care if everyone knows it. Jokes aside, the mc does acquire a lot of women, and from what I have read in the synopsis there are even more to be acquired. He obviously doesn't have the time to deal with them all, and will likely consistently ignore a group of them who simply aren't near him. He also isn't super clear about his intentions to love multiple people with anyone but this one heroine who also double's as current best girl. Final flaw is a matter of personal preference, and not something that is necessarily a problem. In fact it hasn't even happened yet. Dimension jumping. For the love of gosh, please dont send him to different universes, he has enough stuff to worry about already. Its fine as is please don't. Anyways, two flaws and personal plea aside, the rest of the story is good. The action is fast and doesn't drag on. The main character is smart while not making inexplicable decisions, the heroines are (mostly) memorable and have their own personalities and thoughts. The system, while sentient, doesn't abuse it's sentience to make the mc do as it wishes. There's also a bit of cringe, but not enough to cause second hand embarrassment. The comedy is also pretty good. It also doesn't hide the seggs from you for 100+ chaps. All in all, besides the romance and writing, everything else is solid. 3/5 Keep it up lad!

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Maplemoron
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Since I'm too lazy to right a review I'll just agree with you as I agree with most everything. The book is fun and enjoyable enough to ignore some flaws all round but seems to be also improving. Nice review by the way.

Doldman116
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Maplemoron:Since I'm too lazy to right a review I'll just agree with you as I agree with most everything. The book is fun and enjoyable enough to ignore some flaws all round but seems to be also improving. Nice review by the way.
horrendous_potato
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Since I'm too lazy to write a reply I'll just agree with you.

Maplemoron:Since I'm too lazy to right a review I'll just agree with you as I agree with most everything. The book is fun and enjoyable enough to ignore some flaws all round but seems to be also improving. Nice review by the way.