70% cringe + 30% meh [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

no magic talent? thats stupid he had good talent in anime........................................................................................

the protagonist is not a villain!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Why? MC is typically Asian protagonist xianxia [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

It means alot for you to come back to this and even overhaul it, even if it is not as good as it is now you will always have my respect for that author.

I'm sorry guys, i can't do this. The mc is not of my liking in my opinion. I get it that the mc is supposed to be like someone who got what they wanted but don't know what to do with it, so much potential but terrible execution, not to say that I'm a professional but this irritates me.~this is all in my opinion

Other than writing quality and updates this story has nothing else going on. Author writes about mc, as if it's a likable character. Well he's not, he won't be and nobody wants to be like him. This is the reason everyone hates on this ff, no wonder author is afraid of comments, sigh...

I think it's entertaining but the grammar needs a little work. It sucks that it seems to have been dropped.

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