Review Detail of Droksd in To live in shadows, a dungeon story

Author here. Plugging my own story. Its a dark version of a dungeon master story. The main character is new to everything and will have a lot of difficulties to get over. This is my first book and I am learning all the time so please give it a try if you think the concept sounds good. I will try to read all comments and reviews made for my book, so tell what you think or leave a comment.