Review Detail of TheAbyssalOne in The way of the villain

Item: The way of the villain
Rating: 4

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TheAbyssalOneLv141yrTheAbyssalOne

I must say good story though I haven’t reached far yet. The story so far has been alright the mc fits the tittle villain but the only downside I have is that it doesn’t give off a dark novel feel but apart from that it good

The way of the villain

Choka

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TheAbyssalOneLv14TheAbyssalOne

Ahhh I now see why it doesn’t give off a dark feel it probably because of the informal grammar and slang being mixed in😓

1yr

ChokaAuthorChoka

You are totally right . I'll work more on that part, I'm kind of new at writing and kind of bad of detailing everything hahaha, but I'm working on that .thanks for the review.

TheAbyssalOne:Ahhh I now see why it doesn’t give off a dark feel it probably because of the informal grammar and slang being mixed in😓

1yr