The grammar is atrocious. Author doesn’t understand the difference between a Vasto Lorde and an Arrancar. Mc doesn’t have a hollow hole, like bruh even Arrancars and Vasto Lordes have it, why did you remove it without an explanation? In conclusion, mc is a human race simp monster main character who right after evolving into a “Vasto Lorde” as authors refers to it, which he is not. He is an Arrancar. Immediately uses garganta to rush to Earth. As soon he arrived at Earth he decides to look for Superman so he could get help getting an object which allow him to walk amongst humans.
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LIKEThe Mc is a vasto Lorde. don't missunderstand Aizen artificial arrancars as the stage aftes adjuchas they're complete diferente things. natural arrancars are an evolution of vasto Lorde it is proven by the first espada whit is a natural arrancar. the Mc is not a human simp he only wants to be seen and perceived by common people so he can live a somewhat normal life because surprise surprise he was a normal human who sudenly wake up as a hollow in hueco mundo a verte normal reaction after al the slaughter and madness he experienced there. also he waited until he become a vasto Lorde si his garganta so he could be sure it is safe to use and lastly he did not go for Superman help he waited to meet the league to find the mages that work whit them to find a solution to his incapability to be seen
Technical_Mirror:The Mc is a vasto Lorde. don't missunderstand Aizen artificial arrancars as the stage aftes adjuchas they're complete diferente things. natural arrancars are an evolution of vasto Lorde it is proven by the first espada whit is a natural arrancar. the Mc is not a human simp he only wants to be seen and perceived by common people so he can live a somewhat normal life because surprise surprise he was a normal human who sudenly wake up as a hollow in hueco mundo a verte normal reaction after al the slaughter and madness he experienced there. also he waited until he become a vasto Lorde si his garganta so he could be sure it is safe to use and lastly he did not go for Superman help he waited to meet the league to find the mages that work whit them to find a solution to his incapability to be seen
Iceman7422:He’s not human though. His soul and body are that of a hollow.
sagepotatoOAA:do you not did you u should get grammar before u come back again :/
But he WAS(This is a major keyword) a human before (what I'm assuming since I haven't read it yet) he died and he reincarnated/isekai'd into a hollow Now it doesn't matter if Bleach did/didn't say a hollow used to be a human I'm also pretty sure that it was never mentioned in Bleach that a Hollow was in DC or for that matter different universes
Iceman7422:He’s not a human though. Never in bleach has it been stated that hollows are humans.
Then you clearly have not paid attention. Hollows are born from Human souls who, for various reasons, do not cross over to the Soul Society after their death and stay in the Human World for too long. Orihime’s dead brother literally became one.
Iceman7422:He’s not a human though. Never in bleach has it been stated that hollows are humans.
Iceman7422:He’s not a human though. Never in bleach has it been stated that hollows are humans.
fr man i read the first chapter and couldn't find anything wrong with the grammar, it is readable and that's already very good for a webnovel fanfic
Sorouko:You have a really high bar for grammar this is prestine for this site