Review Detail of mow in A Hollow in DC and Beyond.
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Disappointing read, its your typical human thats reincarnated into a non human being that wants to go back to being as human as possible and return to society. Ends up joining the Young justice and thats as far as i got. Also it seems like the author doesn't really research much on the stuff he's writing and im talking about how hollows evolve/work. He's just a Vasto Lord but somehow looks human, lost most of his mask when turning into a vasto lord annd the hole in his chest also filled up, even Arrancars which are above Vasto lords in term of evolution line have it but oh well.
A Hollow in DC and Beyond.
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It's actually not, just the writer's naming sense is terrible. you could check it out if you want to, promise it's a really good read but your choice
mow:Eh sounds too chinese for my taste.
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Sphire1707:It's actually not, just the writer's naming sense is terrible. you could check it out if you want to, promise it's a really good read but your choice
the whole trope of wanting to get back home to normal is so bland and uninteresting, bleh. I mean I get it, logically and in a real situation it would definitely happen this way but this is a fanfic and I'm tired of reading the pleas of some reincarnated bloke that just wants to go home, especially since he isn't in a total dead world. I mean, if he was I worm then yeah...
Not really worth the read, even if you somehow dont mind the things that i mentioned about the MC only having hollow powers while not really being one since the author took away the mask and the hole the story is simply too rushed to be enjoyable in anyway i think it took him a month or two to go from normal hollow to Vasto lord?
Khalderas:the whole trope of wanting to get back home to normal is so bland and uninteresting, bleh. I mean I get it, logically and in a real situation it would definitely happen this way but this is a fanfic and I'm tired of reading the pleas of some reincarnated bloke that just wants to go home, especially since he isn't in a total dead world. I mean, if he was I worm then yeah...
Sphire1707:It's actually not, just the writer's naming sense is terrible. you could check it out if you want to, promise it's a really good read but your choice
tempting but I think I'm going to just give up looking for new books. these days its harem trash or you get the 'op mc' that struggles and gets slapped around. basically a fake op mc and well I'm sick of it.
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