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Khalderas5dCommentedit's so deep that it bypassed deep and went into pseudo psychological drivel
In the end, even someone like me is just as simple as everyone else; I only worry about simple things like whether I'll be able to write the next day, whether lightning will strike me right on my head when it rains, or if my heart, due to some unknown illness, will stop beating. When our fate is led by a human taking the stance of Cronos, there is very little we can do to avoid things. We are weak and fragile, and at the same time, we are the ones who cause the most harm. I would have liked to bring out that dark side and be a predator, but it's not worth it in a world like this.- Khalderas5dReplied to Exquisite
truly a sussy baka
Ah, by the way, my name in this life was Suzaku Suzuki... - Khalderas5dReplied to cabooseiscool_1
true but remember, the red priests are not a monolith, some will definitely serve the MC but there are others who would not and might betray.
"Ah, I suggest not exchanging the gold ingot, my lord. You can directly buy land and mansions using the gold. I know someone who can help us do that. He is one of the Red Priests in Lys." - Khalderas5dReplied to TimEaterOfWorlds
cause it would kinda be noticeable? what 7 year old has business alone with the bank?
"Take this ingot and sell it for some coins. We are going to Lys to hide from Baratheon or the Lannister." - Khalderas5dReplied to Not_SkeleBlade
yeah, it's pretty much Minecraft physics so far
I grit my teeth as I can feel pain go through my knuckle from punching the tree. However, it is a necessity. After a few seconds, I see a massive wooden log appear before me. I store them inside my inventory and start punching once again. - Khalderas17dReplied to Kw0z
then say it, normally you wouldn't need to but with the way you've written this dude is the way of someone who doesn't care about anyone and we are suddenly supposed to believe he cares about Octavia? and how does he know? she oy said she was in the Box because she was born, did he extrapolate that info while in camp? when? where, how? how did this revelation affect him? you didn't write this at all, that's whybit doesn't make sense
At that point, the last thing he saw before he fell unconscious was Octavia crying and thanking him as she huddled into his stomach, and Clarke coming over and looking at his wound to try to stop the blood loss. - Khalderas17dReplied to SexyYoungMaster
we good, g, we good
At that point, the last thing he saw before he fell unconscious was Octavia crying and thanking him as she huddled into his stomach, and Clarke coming over and looking at his wound to try to stop the blood loss. - Khalderas17dReplied to Kw0z
then explain better ffs, how come he now magically cares about people that, 24 hours ago were on said ark?
At that point, the last thing he saw before he fell unconscious was Octavia crying and thanking him as she huddled into his stomach, and Clarke coming over and looking at his wound to try to stop the blood loss. - Khalderas17dReplied to Kw0z
author, hasn't even smelled a woman, let alone touched her haha
Even back in the Sky Box, women came up to him with either romantic or sexual feelings towards him, and though he followed up on some of the sexual ones as long as he was sure the women didn't have any kind of STD's, he never really followed back up with them. It was more of a way to get his frustration and sexual needs out than to start anything with them. - Khalderas17dReplied to BLatman
the author got cooked, idgaf if you read whatever fiction (excepting the cursed tags) as long as you enjoy it. ɓut author got so fired up that he scanned your profile, that makes it a 100 times more amusing
At that point, despite it being freezing in the room, Sen even had to take his shirt off to cool himself down, which revealed the numerous tattoos he had gotten from a young tattoo artist in the Sky Box, though he had to pay for them with some of his rations. - Khalderas18dReplied to SexyYoungMaster
bro, I'm on your side and here I am, catching strays
At that point, the last thing he saw before he fell unconscious was Octavia crying and thanking him as she huddled into his stomach, and Clarke coming over and looking at his wound to try to stop the blood loss. - Khalderas18dCommented
so you just conveniently forgot he was injured, right?
Almost instantly, as soon as she saw Sen standing, she hurriedly stood up and rushed towards him, wrapping her around around his body in a hug. - Khalderas18dCommented
large gashes don't just stop bleeding after a couple of hours, he would need stitches my guy and even then, some bleeding g would be expected, not a lot but some
Knowing he wasn't bleeding anymore, he felt a sense of relief and thought, 'Thank you, Clarke.' - Khalderas18dReplied to Kw0z
bro, he's saying that it doesn't make sense at all, you wrote him earlier as a complete edgelord but now he suddenly, against all previous characterisation, risks his life for Octavia? It don't make no sense lil'bro, you're contradicting yourself.
At that point, the last thing he saw before he fell unconscious was Octavia crying and thanking him as she huddled into his stomach, and Clarke coming over and looking at his wound to try to stop the blood loss. - Khalderas18dCommented
it's an animal, they don't do that
But as soon as the water snake noticed Sen jumping into the water, it let go of Octavia, letting her go, and switching it's focus onto him, and while it tried to bite him, it missed, and it's tooth scraped acrossed his chest, creating a large gash. - Khalderas18dReplied to left_ballof_madara
above bro is an idiot but don't get mad lil bro, have fun
Sen then walked ahead of all of them, with Octavia quickly following after him, but before she left, she said, "I agree with Sen. I say float 'em all," which for some reason made Sen feel pleased. - Khalderas18dCommented
you're trying so hard to make him a no nonsense man that it's coming off as try harding. I bet your MC mews and gives himself speeches in the mirror
As soon as everybody saw it, though Sen just slightly grimaced in disgust, everybody else recoiled back in fear, looking terrified. - Khalderas18dCommented
Alpha Male, twink looking boy wannabe
"I said I want it." This time, instead of saying it nicely, Sen spoke in a cold tone, and with the small distance between him and Murphy, he stepped forward, grabbed the amateur's hand, and squeezed tightly until he dropped the knife. Then he kneed Murphy in the gut, causing him to fall on the ground.