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HarshCritic
HarshCriticLv21yr
2023-01-27 03:32

It’s decent but I’d prefer if Harry Potter here is a reincarnator with a cunning and cold personality. I mean, he’s been to many worlds but he isn’t that strong. If I’d been to that many world I would’ve sucked those worlds dry. I will take any powers that will be useful to me. He always prioritizes making friends and whatnot and helping other people. That’s not bad, per se. But I would’ve prioritize myself or my loved ones first. He should’ve been the God of the Omniverse by now. Some worlds are easier to get stronger. Like Tensura, he should super OP by now.

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unknown_daoist
unknown_daoistLv14

thats just personal opinion, rebiews arent about that :/

Ototsu_Yume
Ototsu_YumeLv10

tbh he's more bipolar than anything, dude's all nice and cuddly when it comes to girls but straight up commits genocide if certain races so much as step into territory he considers 'his' like the whole Kyoto and later Japan. The author has a serious hate for fallen angels, devils (besides Serafall and Sairoarg) and even angels besides Gabriel. The romance in the novel is absolutely nonexistent too, the guy ends up with a massive 'harem' with loads of adopted kids yet the furthest he's gone in literal millennia with anyone is a kiss on the cheek and then becomes a blushing mess. And unless the guy posting this novel here from FF has done some SERIOUS edits, then the grammar comes across like it was written by a kid during lunch break too. The premise of this novel and it's sequels are great, the execution is abysmal and you can see that the author absolutely despises DxD.

Ototsu_Yume
Ototsu_YumeLv10

Oh and completely disregard him being Harry Potter, it's never actually relevant. The one time he did anything 'wizard like' was just throwing dueling spells about in MHA because they were spells weak enough for him to use without destroying the known universe or some tripe. Most of the time the mc shows up it's just for people to praise how cool he is and declare how they want his dragon scales and girls wanting to ride him. (and not in the fun way.)

Ototsu_Yume:tbh he's more bipolar than anything, dude's all nice and cuddly when it comes to girls but straight up commits genocide if certain races so much as step into territory he considers 'his' like the whole Kyoto and later Japan. The author has a serious hate for fallen angels, devils (besides Serafall and Sairoarg) and even angels besides Gabriel. The romance in the novel is absolutely nonexistent too, the guy ends up with a massive 'harem' with loads of adopted kids yet the furthest he's gone in literal millennia with anyone is a kiss on the cheek and then becomes a blushing mess. And unless the guy posting this novel here from FF has done some SERIOUS edits, then the grammar comes across like it was written by a kid during lunch break too. The premise of this novel and it's sequels are great, the execution is abysmal and you can see that the author absolutely despises DxD.
AlastorGF
AlastorGFLv1

Me estas jodiendo? tiene según su estado SSJ GOD y me decís que no puede hacer lo que quiera? ok mas razones para decir que esta fanfic es malo

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