Review Detail of WattersAntone in Immortal In The Magic World

I don’t usually do reviews but I liked this story so I’m going to do one. First the translation could be better, there are multiple instances of wrong pronouns or different names. One thing that confuses me a little is that the story has a more western style like western names for everything but the city’s name is clearly not western. This isn’t too bad but a story should pick a style of name and stick with it unless there’res multiple cultures in the story and different names would fit the narrative. Second the world background is lacking, the reader doesn’t even know anything about the world other than he lives in a empire of knights with four duchies surrounding it even though Eli has lived there for three years with plenty of time to learn and multiple ways to relay it to us. These are things easily fixed going forward so I hope the novel continues because I do enjoy it and would recommend it.