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Heavens_PathLv62yr
2022-11-11 11:45

I am really enjoying this new book! The MC doesn't have some ridiculous nonsense cheat, that instantly gives him everything he needs or provides plot armour. Rather he has only one advantage (immortality) and has to work hard and take things patiently in order to rise to the top. Story building is good, and the pace is perfect. Not much is currently known about the world, but in a good/mysterious way. However my only issue with this novel is the grammar quality, the names are often spelt differently in the same chapter. It's annoying, and there are some other small grammatical mistakes. A simple proofread would fix this issue! Overall, excellent book and I hope it gets picked!

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LonelytreeLv6

I will check on the names difference. Thanks for pointing it out :)

Sullivan_HectorLv4

Same same same!!! Superb review, I also hope it gets picked! :)))

CCP_ARE_RETARDEDLv2

Trash why you put imortal in your tittle but mc not strong enough from ch 1 look at One Punch man eps 1 saitama can one punch the enemy like the title say. but you !!! not even close stop baiting people change thetitle !!!!

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