Review Detail of Mah_olliva in The Stark Emperor!!!
Review detail
Extremely rushed story to get an idea the mc says his first word to his family literally in the first days of his life, the story doesn't have time to build feelings and then it comes with some nonsense about the loss of the mc's mother and lap him it got really bad, and we didn't even have a decent interaction between them. Besides the main problem the MC simply won't have any challenge in this world, at 12 years old he is already 2 times stronger than the mountain and has vibranium weaponry in addition to peak stats in this world, it's just a walk in the park this world for the MC
The Stark Emperor!!!
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and yes I did make the MC op from the start but I will not make him steam role over everything, and the fyi he said his first words on his first name day so at 1 year old, and just because I did not write about his feelings being built up is because it's not really needed as any decent human will always have love for his mother and feel a heavy loss when she dies
The translation was as if the mc was announced to the houses of the north in the first days and spoke his first words at the event, I apologize for this misunderstanding. In relation to feelings, I must point out that what makes readers identify with the characters or even develop empathy and show that they are also human with feelings, my comment was a criticism for the lack of interaction between them and soon after showing a reaction so strong with her death, simply for whoever is reading it is like a random person had died.
EndlessParadox:and yes I did make the MC op from the start but I will not make him steam role over everything, and the fyi he said his first words on his first name day so at 1 year old, and just because I did not write about his feelings being built up is because it's not really needed as any decent human will always have love for his mother and feel a heavy loss when she dies
