I gotta say, pretty awesome storyline with an interesting writing style from the Author~ The way the MC's stressed out and then finds something that'll make his life even more interesting is quite literally amazing! I can't wait to see where his story goes~ Great Job Author ^^ [img=recommend][img=update]

It was an amazing read with great potential, the author did great with the character design and the pace of the story. I love it and will highly recommend it.

I have to say that this book isn't bad at all. Like the idea of having the MC be a bit different from the usual MC's we see, in terms of race. It's a breath of fresh air. I also like how the conversations flow. The dialogue between the three friends make the book a but more lively, so that's another plus... Now for the cons... There's a lot of unnecessary info being dumped in all at once, especially in the first chapter. There are minor grammatical errors that can't be noticed easily and more than a few punctuation errors. The Way it is written in first person is also a big turn off for me (personal issue). It think the story would be better if told in third person. Overall, is till think this is a good one, as it is very comfortable to read. 4.0/5.0... 😁

Descriptions are top-notch making the readers immersed into the story while still allowing the readers imagination to be creative. Story development is good and the MC is smart and most importantly, new and unique ideas. Well done. Keep up the good work. [img=recommend]

Here is my assessment The plot was intriguing, but I'm not really into these kinds of books, so all I can really say about it is that it was good. However, the paragraphs were too long; try shortening them so that readers like me can read it easily. I've only read the first five chapters, can't read further, but I'll definitely add it to my library.

This story has potential to draw the reader in. I admire your work. The characters are beautifully plotted. Keep writing like this. I would like to read more.

There are many books I have read. There also are many paces in which said stories are meant to be read. Beyond potential, this I truly believe is meant to be published and made to print whenever able. A story where this is headed is not like the majority on this app. It is truly a rare gem. All stories have potential. Rare are they that are already great. If ever finished, this will be one of them.

I am not into game novels , but this once is catchy from the start .The detailed description about the ML and his two friends are interesting and make me immerse in the story also the plot that will unfold seems intrigue. I am going to read it whole ! So far is a good novel , with a great writing style, simple and efficient, also has great vocabulary . Keep up the good work !

This book is really great! It is refreshing to read like you're just casually reading a shounen manga. The book is easy to read because of how simple the writing style is. It doesn't use deep or unfamiliar words to make the story sound mesmerizing but makes the story quite tough to understand. Every chapter has a very intriguing and engaging plotline. Even if each chapter is quite long that it makes it quiet it doesn't really matter since it can get its readers invested in reading the story. Hope this gets more attention from the readers. Good work, author.