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2024-05-04 13:01

Too much monolog from the MC. Almost half of the content from a lot of chapters is technology stuff, which wouldn´t be that bad if this wasn´t supposed to be a Pokemon fanfic instead of a sci-fi novel. Even the few battles that occurred had ended in a weird and kind of boring way because the MC used overthink scientific base strategies or the direct use of the MC octomechanic arms. I'm not gonna give a lower review, mainly because I believe there is room to improve and maybe there is the right audience for this, it just happens to be I´m not that audience.

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