I'm currently really liking this novel. Its only real problem is its writing. The author doesn't really structure the chapters that well and will sometimes skip writing some things presuming the reader will understand what's happening either way. The main character is enjoyable but seems to have a preference for dark-skinned women. There is nothing wrong with that but I want to have some variety between the girls. Not just describing their perfect dark skin. On the topic of his harem and its future members. There are too many women and too few chapters for them to be able to develop but all of them are fun. The world background seems promising with a whole universe with a few mysteries seemingly planned out.
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LIKEThanks for the review. Structure was a problem when I started as I was a giga novice. But shouldn't be an issue after 30+ There Is no time to go back and edit fre chapters quickly and in slowly getting through it. I like dark/tanned women, there are plenty of others so maybe you haven't read very far into it? He only has like 7 main women at latest chapters so confused with the too many women comment. Duke.
Yeah, I have only read around halfway into the novel. I can update my review after reading all of the currently available chapters of the novel if my opinion changes.