The novel is really good and has a interesting concept. It’s a mix from the typical system harem with the own ideas of the author. I like how the mc isn’t just a brainless simp or a dumb wannabe chad. The only thing I found that are a bit off putting are some illogical moments, like at the beginning how the mc family didn’t showed any reaction to his change in appearance. Overall you should give this novel a chance and I hope you will like it like I did. PS: Author keep out the good work!
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Sorry about that; thanks for the review. I hope to make the reaction more impactful and explain it better as I edit and refine the free chapters in the next four to five months. (I need to Quit my full-time job) I hope you can continue to enjoy the novel as I take the feedback and improve it as much as possible, thanks to wonderful readers like yourself. The Duke
I just reread the first chapters and noticed the changes. The chapters are much more enjoyable to read. I’m sorry for criticising you before, I didn’t know you already edited them. Also do you intend to open a discord server?
I do; it's planned for the next few months. I am not very savvy with discord, so it's taking a while to set it up. Also, I still need to touch them a bit it's a work in progress, and all criticism helps me, even if I update them. Tomorrow I can improve them more! I hope to have all the first-person chapters gone and written better before summer's end. Those were written in my first 3 months as a writer xD so bad! (WTB time artefact!)
