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2023-05-06 16:42

An enjoyable read. The fanfic follows Giotto adventure in One Piece world. He has a system that allows him to summon members of the Vongola family (so far, arcobaleno, varia, primo guardians, staff working for vongola) Now, this is interesting but it kinda breaks the immersion when the vongola guardians arrive in the world at their peak and have the power to fight against the strongest pirates in the world with just their dying flame. Would have been much more interesting if instead of skipping directly to the strongest forces of Vongola, he got instead Tsunayoshi and his guardians when they just received their ring. Training them with reborn, going on missions on the sea, making allies and enemies, fighting for influence... Right now there's no plot and honestly, the Vongola family is too op.

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Ur_Mom_Gay_lol
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if he got Tsuna and friends it would just get weird and confusing since he's Tsuna's grandpa yet not at the same time and Tsuna himself gets stronger than whitebeard within the span of a year so he would just slam the verse as within a year with tsuna alone he would be god stomping

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