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qsdfhLv32yr
2023-05-06 16:42

An enjoyable read. The fanfic follows Giotto adventure in One Piece world. He has a system that allows him to summon members of the Vongola family (so far, arcobaleno, varia, primo guardians, staff working for vongola) Now, this is interesting but it kinda breaks the immersion when the vongola guardians arrive in the world at their peak and have the power to fight against the strongest pirates in the world with just their dying flame. Would have been much more interesting if instead of skipping directly to the strongest forces of Vongola, he got instead Tsunayoshi and his guardians when they just received their ring. Training them with reborn, going on missions on the sea, making allies and enemies, fighting for influence... Right now there's no plot and honestly, the Vongola family is too op.

Vongola Primo in One Piece

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4.4
412 Chs

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Ur_Mom_Gay_lol
Ur_Mom_Gay_lolLv4

if he got Tsuna and friends it would just get weird and confusing since he's Tsuna's grandpa yet not at the same time and Tsuna himself gets stronger than whitebeard within the span of a year so he would just slam the verse as within a year with tsuna alone he would be god stomping

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Flowerhead_Evan
Flowerhead_EvanLv4

1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!

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Ur_Mom_Gay_lol
Ur_Mom_Gay_lolLv4

if you can't wait and want to read ahead go to Paetrion but if your poor like me then go to mtl nation and search up "Vongola in Grand Line"

1yr
Dagonoid
DagonoidLv2

a good fanfic I hope it continues like this and it doesn't stop out of nowhere. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔

2yr
Lvec
LvecLv4

I finally found a good vongola ff well its good so far so please keep it up or keep up the translation whichever andI will rate this 5 stars for now to help it

2yr
Ashir_Ahmad
Ashir_AhmadLv4

Reveal spoiler

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Humbuub
HumbuubLv5

The translation is readable. Story Development was meh, typical One Piece ff, fight the same enemies as Luffy and barely add anything new to the story. The MC is likeable, but most characters just exist to fight. Updates were fast enough. The World Background is quite skewed, Undying Flame should be a power system weaker than Haki since it's not the origin force of the One Piece world. But Author kinda equate it to somewhat like mixed Armament and Conqueror's Haki.

1yr
Alex3DxD
Alex3DxDLv3

typical Chinese story, i.e. a slave to the system who aspires to become the strongest due to his trust issues and delusions of persecution, he has a group of slaves following him who are as flat as possible, the rewriting helps to swallow . this story but it does not eliminate the rest of the problems

10mth
Daoist906425
Daoist906425Lv4

I just came to ask what is the problem that Chinesse authors have with Oden, why do they always make him dirty and kill him in a bad way without even trying to save the guy?

1yr
Slap_king
Slap_kingLv4

If You love one piece and you didn't read this fanfic, Then I have bad news for Ya Pal .... You are what I call UD. What's UD? Let me explain it to you, you know what dust means Righ? What is the use of Dust? Its use is simple really, it only indicates that something is dirty and you need to clean it. Now, how about the dust that you don't see? That's useless dust as it failed its only job. And that's UD, useless dust. And that you if you didn't read this fanfic.

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