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Thanks for the chapter. I can't help but notice Vega requires a focus. In the last scene, he seems to seek his brother and grandfather attention when such a deep phenomenon that influences him directly happens. As if he wanted to share his emotions with them. I would have thought he would have wanted to connect with his emotions, with his wand, to focus on himself rather than those around him. Yeah, to me, the MC lacks the selfishness that drives a person. His focus is not on himself but on others. Does he lives, grows and overcomes challenge for himself or others?

Look like a group of old nobility who are delusional and live in their past glory. They do not seem to be the true architects of the wizard world.

The first men! So all magic comes from the old gods... I know! The MC is the heir of the three eyed raven!

He knows where it hurts

It is realistic not to try to change Bran's fate. Behind his accident is the three eyed raven scheme. Preventing the accident is making an enemy of the three eyed raven. Plus, it would shift many future plot lines such as the assassination attempt on Bran that leads to Ned trusting Littlefinger.

An average novel with a good start then it becomes word padding. In the beginning, there's much foreshadowing, MC seems to be struggling, and though there's not one trace of a plot, the chapters flowed smoothly. However, after the MC starts training to become 'stronger', it becomes a word padding grinding fest. Whereas in the beginning there was a serious vibe, it becomes a comedy around chapter 30-40 with nothing driving the story forward except training.

Add slice of life tag to the story

If only the translation was the main issue...

It's painful to read fanfics written by those who did not understand the original story. Itachi was just a pawn. Even if you remove him, Danzo will not let the Uchiha live in peace.