The story and grammer is good but I just read similar Chinese novel ok n webnovel and then mtl it. This is very similar to that one down to thoughts of female leads so it feels somewhat unnatural to me that they thoughts and reactions to protagonist voice like it doesn't feel like they are characters of dxd. But overall story is good as I mentioned and hope you will countinue it.
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You do make a somewhat good point but also take into account that this is pre-canon highschool dxd also we now know that these girls in this fanfic's original Canon if the mc wasn't there, would be affected by the protagonist halo so their reactions now would be of great disgust especially for someone who heard their so called future husband so that he has full intention to impregnate them, also take into account that they don't know issei at this point so to them he is a stranger going on about impregnating them which is creepy and weird
well you're right about not knowing fanfic canon but in original they all knew issei was a big pervert and what his thoughts I mean he was screaming oppai half the time in front of them so it's not far from this. You can say that they fell for him under protagonist halo and I agree with that. And about dialogues, I was talking more about how they are saying things like "steel man" and it was same in MTL that I read
Aun_Aqeel:You do make a somewhat good point but also take into account that this is pre-canon highschool dxd also we now know that these girls in this fanfic's original Canon if the mc wasn't there, would be affected by the protagonist halo so their reactions now would be of great disgust especially for someone who heard their so called future husband so that he has full intention to impregnate them, also take into account that they don't know issei at this point so to them he is a stranger going on about impregnating them which is creepy and weird
Transmigrated as a villain but the heroines are on my side on webnovel
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I could feel the Chinese emanating from the synopsis.
Me pasas el link de la historia de mlt
Characters feel somewhat OOC
Una cosa es aguantar un pervertido algo útil pero luego empiezas a pensar que es simplemente alguien honesto con sus pensamientos , pero de ahí a un tipo posesivo que te quiere violar y quiere matar a cualquiera q se acerque a ti además de que ssw anda hablando como si te conociera o le pertenecueras desde el principio ya se vuelve .motivo de desagrado
dash9274:well you're right about not knowing fanfic canon but in original they all knew issei was a big pervert and what his thoughts I mean he was screaming oppai half the time in front of them so it's not far from this. You can say that they fell for him under protagonist halo and I agree with that. And about dialogues, I was talking more about how they are saying things like "steel man" and it was same in MTL that I read
