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2022-09-11 06:49

It’s a good book,

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Okay, let's run it down. As per my usual set up if you want to see a summary of of review and Star ratings, skip to the end. [As of my review there are 13 Chapters] Okay, starting off we got the writing quality. Pretty darn great, very few spelling mistakes, good grammar, almost no misused words and solid sentance structure. Author is pretty great at writing, although there are some hiccups here and there. Story Development. Honestly, while the story is interesting, I feel like it's dragged a bit. The past 3 or so chapters have all taken place in the same night, meaning that the story isn't really moving anywhere. It doesn't quite feel stale, yet, but there is a chance it may get to that if the author keeps a similar story pacing. Spending several chapters each event may drive away people who prefer faster paced stories. Character design isn't bad, but it isn't really outstanding either. I'd say it's about middle of the pack. The MC acts like your usual friendly neighborhood sociopathic battle maniac, but that's sort all we get. We don't get much building on his past, his personal feelings, his relationships or anything else. It makes him feel a bit one Dimensional, I'd recommend expanding on this in the future. Updating Stability is pretty solid, there aren't a whole lot of chapters released every week, but it's nice to see a new one every now and then. World background is kinda hard to rate, as its still early in the story and most of the story is spent explaining his powers, inventions, or him meeting people. It's MHA though, so it's about middle of the pack in terms of world background potential. Summary. Writing quality is good, nothing to really say other than that. It's consistently solid and doesn't really drop at any point. Story development is slow at times and can get almost stale with the interactions, if you don't like slower paced books this isn't really for you. Character design is decent aswell, MC feels a bit flat and one dimensional, he doesn't really get expanded upon beyond just "he's smart" and "he likes to fight" but this could change in the future. Updating Stability is just alright, not much to say on that, but author hasn't dropped off yet. World Background is about what you'd expect from a MHA novel, MHA doesn't have much of a world setting to begin with so I'm cutting the author some Slack Star Ratings. Writing Quality: 4.3/5 Story Develoent: 3.8/5 Character Design: 2.7/5 Updating Stability: 3.8/5 World Background: 3/5 Total Star Rating: 3.8/5 I'd read it if you have the free time, but the pacing can feel slow and the MC can feel a bit flat. In general, not a bad novel at all. Keep up the good work author.

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