this is pretty fucking good, you can see the author put a lot of work into it, some weird stuff here and there but they make sense
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Updated: Thanks for reading, possibly you will find some spelling errors, this is because I am not a native English speaker. This story was made for mere entertainment and there is no update date. None of the images belong to me, these were taken from the internet and then edited for the convenience of the story. ***Prepare the popcorn and enjoy this Chaotic Adventure***
Okay, let's run it down. As per my usual set up if you want to see a summary of of review and Star ratings, skip to the end. [As of my review there are 13 Chapters] Okay, starting off we got the writing quality. Pretty darn great, very few spelling mistakes, good grammar, almost no misused words and solid sentance structure. Author is pretty great at writing, although there are some hiccups here and there. Story Development. Honestly, while the story is interesting, I feel like it's dragged a bit. The past 3 or so chapters have all taken place in the same night, meaning that the story isn't really moving anywhere. It doesn't quite feel stale, yet, but there is a chance it may get to that if the author keeps a similar story pacing. Spending several chapters each event may drive away people who prefer faster paced stories. Character design isn't bad, but it isn't really outstanding either. I'd say it's about middle of the pack. The MC acts like your usual friendly neighborhood sociopathic battle maniac, but that's sort all we get. We don't get much building on his past, his personal feelings, his relationships or anything else. It makes him feel a bit one Dimensional, I'd recommend expanding on this in the future. Updating Stability is pretty solid, there aren't a whole lot of chapters released every week, but it's nice to see a new one every now and then. World background is kinda hard to rate, as its still early in the story and most of the story is spent explaining his powers, inventions, or him meeting people. It's MHA though, so it's about middle of the pack in terms of world background potential. Summary. Writing quality is good, nothing to really say other than that. It's consistently solid and doesn't really drop at any point. Story development is slow at times and can get almost stale with the interactions, if you don't like slower paced books this isn't really for you. Character design is decent aswell, MC feels a bit flat and one dimensional, he doesn't really get expanded upon beyond just "he's smart" and "he likes to fight" but this could change in the future. Updating Stability is just alright, not much to say on that, but author hasn't dropped off yet. World Background is about what you'd expect from a MHA novel, MHA doesn't have much of a world setting to begin with so I'm cutting the author some Slack Star Ratings. Writing Quality: 4.3/5 Story Develoent: 3.8/5 Character Design: 2.7/5 Updating Stability: 3.8/5 World Background: 3/5 Total Star Rating: 3.8/5 I'd read it if you have the free time, but the pacing can feel slow and the MC can feel a bit flat. In general, not a bad novel at all. Keep up the good work author.
so good character design also The way this story is made the pictures and edits so good I highly recommend reading this novel ✅[img=update][img=update][img=update]
I really love this story, i don't think I've ever seen this character used as the mc in any other fics. ......................................................................................................................................................................................................
One of the best fanfics I have seen in recent times. The premise is awesome. The story is well written. The author puts a lot of effort in both in terms of writing and including cool images. This is worth following, and I am looking forward to reading more.
Man I love Chaos and this book just got this perfect thing for me ❣️
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great fanfic that combines the best aspects of the child emperor and the villain personality
You know the drill, a medical student was watching the finale episode of Pokemon. "Man can't believe it's finally over. Looking at his clock, Shoot I'm going to be late." But our protagonist met our old friend Truck-kun due to a change in destiny. "At least things aren't so bad I get to start my Journey, wait why am I Ash, Why is almost everything and everyone different, and why is this world so much harder than the original?!" Additional Tags: Maybe-Harem, Not stupid MC, multiple plot lines, Random decisions from dice rolls No dead pokemon parts to increase strength No potential stuff Only training methods and bond ________________________ So hey, this is my first fanfic, Please don't murder me, secondly, this is an AU with anime, games, and manga elements, with a bit of the novel. Earlier chapters are ruff, but I think the later ones get better. Also if you have a complaint, Idea, criticism, or whatever, fell free to say it I love reading feedback from you all
A Group Chat with all the Anime Girls you love! Our MC can go to their world. No NTR, Dark MC, Just pure fun read and slightly ecchi fanfic. ... Patreon(.)com/Bleam — 70 Advance Chapters! [Original Name: 综漫聊天群:二次元女主争抢我]
Ryosuke arrives at the Naruto world, and awakens the talent entry system which allows him to convert a person's biopheromome into a talent entry. Collected: [Uchiha Sasuke's Hair] Transformation talent entry: [Spirit of Vengeance: You are an avenger, you are unstoppable on the road of revenge] [Efficiency of Chakra refining is 1000%! Ninjutsu power 500%!] [Cursed eyes: Your eyes are cursed by the world, but the world is ignorant, how would it know your talent?] [Get Sharingan (with Uchiha blood) Eye awakening efficiency 1000%! Pupil power 500%!] [Indra's resentment: Indra is resentful because of his father's preference for Asura, and his resentment is unmatched!] [Pupil Power 500%! Susanoo's size 500%! Ppil Technique Power 500%! Chakra 1000%!] Ryosuke: "Sasuke's hair gave me all this? What about Naruto?" Uzumaki Naruto next door shivered subconsciously, feeling as if he was being targeted by something terrible. Disclaimer: This is just a translation. All the credit goes to the original authors. Raw: 人在木叶,我能升级天赋词条 Read upto 70 chapters ahead on p@treon.com/alex_1000
[STOP STEALING MY WORK, RULATE SITE BASTARDS] Aron died in an underground fight arena, only to wake up in Marvel World with an OP power similar to All For One. But in this world, he is a clone, saved by the X-Men. Follow, Aron's new journey as he tries his best to fit in this world of endless chaos. The biggest question is if he is a clone then where's the original body? [Timeline: AU] [Harem> So, please, if you aren't into it, don't read.] ...[The cover picture is AI made]...[This is not a translation.] Support link: pat eon.com/UnknownMaster [15+ advance chs] [No double billing] ----------- DON'T TRANSLATE OR MAKE AUDIOBOOK OF THIS BOOK
A 9-to-5 McDonald's worker dies after being hit by a truck, only to awaken in the body of a recently deceased adventurer in the fantasy world of Danmachi. With a unique skill that allows him to scavenge abilities and skills from the dead, he decided to be a Scavenger in danmachi.
Zaydas, son of Zatanna Zatara and Sirzechs Lucifer. At the age of 18, he regained the memories of a past life and discovered various truths about the world and himself. As if that weren’t enough, the next morning, something unexpected happened. [Welcome to the Conquest System, Host Zaydas. Being chosen by the Conquest System grants the Host a [Starter Pack]. Would you like to open it now?] ********** Worlds that Zaydas has been to so far: My Hero Academia (MHA) Isekai Nonbiri Nouka (INN) DC AU Anime Crossover (DAAC) Tensei Shitara Slime Datta Ken (TSSDK) Naruto What to expect: • DxD/Multiverse. • OP MC from the start, getting even stronger as the story progresses. • A playful MC with a serious side. • His impact on the DxD world and other dimensions. • Reactions from people in other worlds because of his achievements. • Rankings. • Well-planned conquest challenges. Read up to 30 chapters ahead on Patreon. At least two chapters will be updated daily, with one free chapter every day. Patreon.com/Zaydas
An Individual from Earth finds themselves in the Shinobi World, equipped with a Scientific System. From that moment, he delved into scientific research far ahead of its time. ___ All rights to the original content belong to their respective creators. Join My Discord: https://discord.gg/rQeZW7gZ4s
"Champion Lance, it’s said that you challenged the Rota Gym yesterday, correct?" A reporter interviews the Champion Lance. "I refuse to answer," Lance replies tersely. "It's said that you battled the Rota Gym Leader with your full team and got completely swept. Is that true?" "I refuse to answer," Lance responds with a cold expression. "It's rumored that after your defeat, the Rota Gym Leader made you change your online name to 'Dodo' for half a month. Is that true?" "I refuse to answer," Lance, now called 'Dodo,' replies, clearly irritated. "What’s your opinion of the Rota Gym Leader?" "I thought having three Dragonites in my team made me invincible, but he had the nerve to set up a hail team on the spot and completely counter me with four Alolan Ninetales! What do I think? This is outrageous! Who let him become a Gym Leader?" ----- If you want to get an early access some chapters you can visit my patreon. Patreon: RockyRoad891