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I like the premise of the story but the gramemar and spelling are so bad it hurt. I can ignore some spellingg errors but its like every sentence words are wrong or misssing. Please get someone to spell check or download Grammarly

not many the boys fanfics, can't wait for more👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

It's horrendous, the high rating is for no reason other than the fact it's 'The Boys'. The novel is so unbelievably bad in every way, from the grammar, relationship building and plot in general. Reading this made me want to rip out my eyes.

Why is there a harem in a “the boys” fic. L. L.

Such a great story I can't wait for more. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

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writing quality: 4 story development: 4 character design: 5 update stability: 2 world background: 4 I know the review is a little harsh but that's how I am. my main problem is update stability. its all over the place.

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