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2022-10-03 04:15

I like the premise of the story but the gramemar and spelling are so bad it hurt. I can ignore some spellingg errors but its like every sentence words are wrong or misssing. Please get someone to spell check or download Grammarly

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Agreed it is kind of hard to read. But I will give the writer the benefit of the doubt as I don't think they are a native English speaker. The way the dialogue is presented feels like the writer does not spend a lot of time talking with people who speak English and chooses words for characters and scenarios that don't match the tone. It's not the worst story I've seen so I would disagree with your one-star but it's defiantly not the 4-5 people are giving.

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