Review Detail of Pclerk in DC: Colossus

This is probably the highest rating I have given so far for any story I have rated. The righting quality is very good, I didn’t notice any distracting errors. Basically there might be some but they were so small I didn’t notice. As the story is still in an early phase, I can’t say to much about update stability yet. The story has developed well for the three chapters. The interactions of characters and surroundings are believable and human. A lot of stories don’t have chat. Character design is where I am the happiest so far. The powers are not over the top but allow survival. The MC isn’t over the top at this point which I hope it stays that way. A lot of stories have the characters freak out about certain villains or heroes like they will kill them for no reason, especially Batman for whatever reason. There hasn’t been much said of the world yet, but I hope the author includes more descriptions of the environment and world. MANY of the authors on here leave this part out which is key for a written story. This story has a lot of potential at this point and I have the author is able to keep up the good work.