Item: DC: Colossus
Rating: 3.4
Author: DetachedDreamer

DetachedDreamerLv142yr

2022-09-11 05:28

The fake Russian accent of the former American, that only seems to show it self when convenient is super cringe. Mostly just adding the word "da" in there and erasing a few words or changing them around seems to be his interpretation of a Russian. lol the story had a good plot and powers but I just couldn't get past how phony it all seemed.

DC: Colossus

Dango_Rameno

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5 Chs

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it was only two or three times I can remember using Da when speaking, and the author meant that he had a Russian accent in everything he said, not just the Da, which was only there for immersion.

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