Review Detail of AngryBamboo in Moved To A New Link ()

This is just my personal opinion, so judge it on your own. Just like the title indicated, the story was very chaotic I don't know if the author deliberated on this or it was just very weird situations and conversations. I don’t know anything about Muslim but Mr.Beck situation was very strange. And why did those 2 strange men suddenly become his guards and why did he instantly accept to be their boss no question ask, that was very weird. Mr.Bee was kidnapped by a stranger, but then he just casually sipped tea without any sign of panic. Mr Beck. who turned out to be Mr Bee dad, and then Mr.Bee just accepted it?? The father he has never seen in his life and he just casually accept the man who hurt and kidnaped him? But then why does he have to smack his son on the head? Couldn’t they just have a normal conversation somewhere (I guess if Mr.Bee didn’t turn out to be his son he would kill him? If he needed the hair for DNA test there are many way to get it ) How can a regular officer said he could erase every charges on Mr.Beck? The conversations between characters were too long. This style was very hard to read and comprehend. Again, I don't know anything about Muslim but religious and political aspects shouldn't be mentioned directly. Even if you feel you have to, you should at least change the name of the religion/country or something like that.