the ability is very creative and good but the mc personality is okay but the way you deliver his speech is too bland he's more like a clown who's trying to make the readers laugh but can't make them it's too awkward personality rather than carefree it's making the story boring wasting the idea of a good ability

Looked forward to reading this after seeing the ratings and the description. What no one wrote was the fact it's the typical shounen troope, No change in the story except a few skipped fights due to the mc's input. His parents and his "gf" wants to punish his behaviour at close to any turn they can due to comedy effect, just the fact his parent(s) wants to punish him for showing off at the sports festival is legit beyond me. The writing quality is superb, except a few typos with names and stuff like that, the only thing that drags this fanfic down is the fact the logic used at every turn to force comedy is literally trash. That said it's not a bad fanfic, just immature and aimed towards teenage readers.

This had sooooo much potential please continue i want to read this. This fanfic became so much for me please please continue i hate it when people stop writing books, novels or fanfics with so much potential.

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Very good but wish author continue the story

unlike others there is a certain quality in this. maybe author age is not low like 12. I dont know. top 3.......................................................

FL boring and forced and cringe , Mc personality annoying, interactions between characters feel unnatural . Close combat weapon of choice is stupid and childish. He doesn't have the mental age he is suppose to have but instead feels like his reincarnation and forcefully pretending not to be a genius since he was a baby tuned him into a stupid class clown .His quirk is fun to develop but the bad parts of his storytelling makes this fan fiction a turn off and hard to bear reading.

Tiene bastante potencial, me gusta como se esta desarrollando la historia así como también los diversos poderes que muestra con sus cartas, estaré apoyando en los próximos capítulos, no dejes caer esta historia

oh I summon the to have it's fire back to write once again, (man where u?)