Review Detail of Pclerk in Manhattan Project

The writing quality is good with few mistakes… carbon dioxide is CO2, not C2O, that was typed multiple times for example. A small mistake that most readers will know what was meant. Updates occur often at this point since the story is early.story and character development are both a little rushed and needs more, still early of course. Making the MC as powerful as he is so early will severely hurt the story as time goes on. There is not much to say about the world background yet as nothing has happened yet needing good descriptions. For now an ok story that just needs a little more planning and content.