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NowGoWithTheFlow
NowGoWithTheFlowLv142yr
2022-11-27 17:03

I stopped at chapter 56 because it made no sense when compared to the rest of the novel. First an foremost when a King, Queen of another nation visits your nation to talk it will be between the two Leaders or at the very minimum the host nation king would at least welcome the guest king. If not done it can be consider insult to the visiting king. Next is when she brought up why the ars isn't there it is not a insult, an very valid reason to bring up. Third for the Rep to call the visiting king insulting is stupid in two ways, first they have no reason to do so, second it just escalates the situation which no train professional would do for no gain. Other wise very good book with few grammar mistakes, with good updates interesting story development.

One Piece : Kingdom Building System

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154 Chs

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Otakuslayer202
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Nicolas_Bahamondes
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the main character is boring basically the story deals with slaves from another dimension making a kingdom for mc the story simply does not go with the world of one piece which is more about adventures and battles between pirates if the main character is going to play rise of kingdom it would be better another anime

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PacificIslander
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(go to end if too lazy to read lel) Sorry this is my opinion based off of reading the first two chapters but. There's not really much information about this story in general, it doesn't really beat around the bush and just goes into the story without any real preparations for the main character. A few things at the start already don't make sense, there's a system which is alright I guess. My only complaint here is that everything is just convinient at the start, the only sort of *work* that the main character puts into it at the start is literally just dividing territories for the future. Also it seems that the system has a conscious and is also named a feminine name. The main character literally has immortality ( and his summons as well, ) along with being able to summon Hashirama Senju at full power at the age of 18 being empowered by haki. Plus he gets instant loyalty. Also somehow 9 million people INSTANTLY hear of his kingdom in 4 seconds because apparently a woman who can see into the future tells everyone. (yes, 9 million no joke) along with that he has a fog that protects his land for 2 years TLDR; bunch of plot holes, immortal MC+his summons, 9 million people, fog that protects his land for 2 years at the begining, his first summon being Hashirama Senju from Naruto whos 18(immortal) and strong cuz haki. I'll read more and change my review if it becomes any better

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Alex3DxD
Alex3DxDLv3

a basic story of broken characters who do nothing. the country is completely protected the main character already summoned as two yonko level characters and so there is nothing that can face him not to mention that it is the secondary characters who move everything the story does not go anywhere is the typical one of receiving a power that breaks the whole world

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Fuckyall
FuckyallLv14

(Sorry for Rating) Before Reading this fanfic I wanted to know, If this Fanfic is your? and you wanted to post a on new account ?? Because I saw 3 other people posting it

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Mr_mysterio
Mr_mysterioLv3

the story at most average is more a story of secondary characters moving from here to there the kingdom simply does not paint anything in the world of one piece without mentioning the deception of its military force and the main character does not contribute anything apart from invoking the people

2yr
LowPriorityCitizen
LowPriorityCitizenLv3

Lets be honest, any fanfic with Kingdom Building but author cant make his own story is bad, especially when fanfic start about the same timeline as canon manga/comic/movie (anyway the source)

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Size_name
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Hello !! How many floors should a bag of rice have, how many floors should a bag of rice have, how much should you pay for a bag of rice, how much should you wash a bag of rice, each grain is muddy, to whom you gave a bag of rice! Spicy Tiansai! ! ! Jiraiya swimming in the sea of ​​dragons and angelica, popsicles melting under the street lamp

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