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sworddreamer
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the idea is good, however the system barely appears and it has not much influence in the story. additionally, there are lot of Chinese culture influence. I understand if OC past life, even if he has live in England for eleven years, but some of the English born characters show also Chinese traits. about the story, this is more like life of slice kind of story. you should expect a lot of "dog's food" as Chinese people say and not much action or not much sense about the power of the OC. I am dropping.

Harry Potter: Card Drawing System

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EyeOfSilver
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Dude its written by a Chinese person, and dude if you dislike the character development of the characters then it isn't the novel for you.

SrCuervo
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Hi, I'm SrCuervo and I'm writing an HP novel where your help would be very useful, I hope you can read it so you can tell me what you think. It's called Harry Potter: Narnia and The World Hidden in a Closet.