sworddreamer

I understand you need to build a character but the OC is a punching bag. when is he going to properly retaliate? he is not a super hero, why care.

is there not a age potion?

the one with Alexandra D'Addario

yes

yes

change to the final girl

wanted?

the idea is good, however the system barely appears and it has not much influence in the story. additionally, there are lot of Chinese culture influence. I understand if OC past life, even if he has live in England for eleven years, but some of the English born characters show also Chinese traits. about the story, this is more like life of slice kind of story. you should expect a lot of "dog's food" as Chinese people say and not much action or not much sense about the power of the OC. I am dropping.

death comes for us all...

a ted mosby play. jajaja