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uflesh940
uflesh940Lv32yr
2022-10-22 03:47

Easily one of the most unoriginal things I've read lately. Time-traveling to play a video game with a cheat? Where haven't I seen this before?

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Kuni_Willie
Kuni_WillieLv3

very interesting

Sinonthe1st
Sinonthe1stLv3

the Problem is not that it is unoriginal, but that from the synopsis it seems he gets everything just because of his luck Talent. Don't get the wrong I am not against cheats or anything but luck is so the thing that should never be a cheat if the Person doesn't need to do something to get the luck. So it seems that that guy just went out of the door found scratch coupon in front of his house opened it and won a million dollar or any other currency I don't care. I mean seriously if I want to see a mc Show of how great he is, I can also pick any other novel. Afterall even log in novels or something like that is better since the mc needs to do something to get it even though it is not much.

Sin_of_GREED
Sin_of_GREEDLv14

luck can also work great in novels in different ways but not it the way it's shown here , take slice of life type, misunderstanding type novels for example better yet just convert this novels into a slice of life type work and it make this work very good to read

Sinonthe1st:the Problem is not that it is unoriginal, but that from the synopsis it seems he gets everything just because of his luck Talent. Don't get the wrong I am not against cheats or anything but luck is so the thing that should never be a cheat if the Person doesn't need to do something to get the luck. So it seems that that guy just went out of the door found scratch coupon in front of his house opened it and won a million dollar or any other currency I don't care. I mean seriously if I want to see a mc Show of how great he is, I can also pick any other novel. Afterall even log in novels or something like that is better since the mc needs to do something to get it even though it is not much.
Liza_D
Liza_DLv1

love this book

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