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WTF_WTFLv41yr
2024-04-04 19:21

This is a trash story, that's how I see it. MC made 200 bloodline gacha each draw was supposed to cost 10 times the previous the first payment was 10 points, but author just wrap the total at 20 billion. 10^200 is not 20 billion, there are other bs like the legendary bloodline is powerful when in fact it only give 2 benefits. Anyways, here's my rating. The translation is meh 3/5 I have seen worse and I have seen better. Story development 1/5 utter bs, everything is for the plot convenience. Character design 1/5 not like I saw the character, but the way they were described, I actually didn't read cause I just speed read this bs. Updating Stability 3/5 I have seen worse and I have seen better. World Background 1/5 not much to say because except for the game I don't know much about their world.

Global Game: Ten Billion Spirit Energy Coins From The Start

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Abyss_Edge
Abyss_EdgeLv4

Heh!. Privilege at chapter 16? you mad bruh?!

1yr

Gamerz_Sal
Gamerz_SalLv2

Interesting novel but not interesting enough for me to unlock chapters from chapter 15 to 200+ to read a generic concept albeit modified... MC has presence of mind but not enough to keep doing random stuffs that gets him exposed not to mention this novel has a chinese author which means there is as high as 85% chance that this novel will include heavy nationalistic mindset and random young master nonsense... So the investment of unlocking chaps is not worth it for this novel...

1yr
JuicyGrape
JuicyGrapeLv4

Is this a translation by the original author or fan translation? Anyway, just because you have 1 million words of whatever doesn't really prove the credibility of your work... At best it proves you are able to write consistently and at length, doesn't really mean it's good but you can always say which book, I'm curious about this credibility... Also, this is the first novel I've seen to have privileged chapters at not even 20 chapters in... truly unique, as most well-known authors in this platform have privileged chapters at ch40...

1yr
KaIeopsis
KaIeopsisLv4

Obviously a MTL translation with no human revising. In just the first couple chapters the amount of spiritual energy coins he has fluctuates between 10 and 100 billion, among other mistakes. It's also incredibly shameless to charge after only 15 chapters if you aren't even going to put any effort into translating it.

1yr
Davros92
Davros92Lv5

One of humanity's greatest revolutions is the perception of sacrificial materials or coverings. It is a material that is less or more durable than the object below it. Originally texts did not have a cover, later the covers protected the book, and it became a means of communication in itself. This book has layers, layers of protection to prevent an unsuspecting reader from seeing how horribly generic the work is.

2yr
Splooj
SploojLv14

MTL locked at chapter 16... cyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

1yr
InfiniteInfinity
InfiniteInfinityLv4

Finally found a novel where the translators do not chop up a chapter into several parts [img=gift]

1yr
Spicicus
SpicicusLv14

it's a good story so far but you are really full of yourself thinking it's so good that chapter 16 is where you should start privileges. there are many books just as good or better that doesn't start privileges until at least chapter 40. you need to stop being so greedy if you want to actually draw in ppl. sorry if that sounds brutal or mean but I'm just being honest with you being too greedy won't get you anywhere.

1yr
james_newman
james_newmanLv15

a perfect combination of twist and turns please continue

1yr
darke22
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