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SpicicusLv141yr
2024-02-08 20:20

it's a good story so far but you are really full of yourself thinking it's so good that chapter 16 is where you should start privileges. there are many books just as good or better that doesn't start privileges until at least chapter 40. you need to stop being so greedy if you want to actually draw in ppl. sorry if that sounds brutal or mean but I'm just being honest with you being too greedy won't get you anywhere.

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