Review Detail of Int_Ink in Multiverse legend of Kurumi Tokisaki
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Ini sedikit membingungkan, bahkan dengan kultivasiku yang tinggi dalam memahami tulisan, masih tetap tidak nyaman membacanya. Bukan karena fanfic ini buruk, saya sangat penasaran dengan idenya, tp ada masalah dalam terjemahannya. Dan juga, ada apa dengan POV??? Jika anda ingin mengubah sudut pandang, sebutkan saja MC, nama karakter, atau POV 3. Jangan membuatnya menjadi membingungkan dengan menambahkan tanda tanya. Saya hanya dapat membantu dengan memberikan penilaian yang adil. Tololng jangan berkecil hati. Saya menulis ulasan ini dalam bahasa indonesia, jd anda bisa menggunakan fitur translate untuk memahaminya.
Multiverse legend of Kurumi Tokisaki
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I thank you for your comment . Unfortunately, the confusion itself may be due to the translation. With each chapter I test a new one. I will try to write even simpler in future chapters to make the translation easier for tranzlator. As for the pov this is my first work and I didn't expect it to be that bad. For that I can only apologize. The situation with the main character's pov will change in the next two or three chapters because I think that if I suddenly changed it now it wouldn't be justified in fan fiction chistory and could be even more confusing. Of course, thank you for your opinion and I apologize for the problems while reading.
If I may ask but what translator do you use? I personally find the website DeepL to offer more accurate translations compared to other translators. At the very least it is a lot better than google translate.
ElizjumGarden:I thank you for your comment . Unfortunately, the confusion itself may be due to the translation. With each chapter I test a new one. I will try to write even simpler in future chapters to make the translation easier for tranzlator. As for the pov this is my first work and I didn't expect it to be that bad. For that I can only apologize. The situation with the main character's pov will change in the next two or three chapters because I think that if I suddenly changed it now it wouldn't be justified in fan fiction chistory and could be even more confusing. Of course, thank you for your opinion and I apologize for the problems while reading.
ArdoAleister:If I may ask but what translator do you use? I personally find the website DeepL to offer more accurate translations compared to other translators. At the very least it is a lot better than google translate.