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ElizjumGarden2mthReplied to AurelLorYes the older version will be observing , but she will no longer intervene directly in story at all . She has not yet disappeared from the story because her existence is fundamental for Kurumi .
" This can not be repaired , we just fixed some of its effects , which from that moment no longer matter to us anyway . If now , the past version of me or you , die it will no longer affect the present us . From the moment of the awakening of the Zafkiel , a new timeline is created . Separating us which means that from now on we live in a different timeline . "- ElizjumGarden2mthReplied to FabianoobinhoCh 68 Good days in an unhappy triangle 1
- ElizjumGarden2mthReplied to Fabianoobinho
I do not want to reveal too much, but yes and no ...... It's going to be a more complicated relationship. Spoiler alert.Kurumi may have some feelings for Emerlad, but they won't be as strong as those for Neo. It's more like love between sisters and nothing more. The same goes for Neo, who will and is very loyal to Kurumi. However, Emerlad will be very close to them, in fact close enough that Neo won't mind what Emerald does with her or with Kurumi. Besides, both Kurumi and Neo will care about Emerlad's happiness.Kurumi wanting Emerald to be happy , will let her into her relationship with Neo . Neo , who despite her superficial indifference to this , inwardly just like Kurumi , will be happy with Emerald's happiness . In short , Neo and Kurumi , will not love Emerlad as they love each other , but on the other hand will love Emerald enough that they will not mind letting Emerald into their relationship . Besides , Emerald's happiness will become important to them by which they would not let her walk sad or worse not let her enjoy the feeling , which they themselves know and understand too well . For this reason, unless they are able to give Emerald a hundred percent of what she feels for them , Emerald will not remain rejected If this explanation seems unclear , I apologize for that but honestly without devoting several chapters to it is difficult for me to explain .
Ch 68 Good days in an unhappy triangle 1 - ElizjumGarden3mthReplied to P_J_Sch
Who knows ? Maybe yes maybe no ?
At the time I thought that after my father's " unfortunate " alcohol poisoning everything would work out for us . Unfortunately , nothing worked out , because my mother less than a day later disappeared , or rather to be accurate , she did not come home . Thus leaving me for certain death . Well at least it would have been certain if I were an ordinary child . - ElizjumGarden3mthReplied to P_J_Sch
Honestly it is difficult for me to determine exactly . However, it will happen for sure , before the start of Volum 1 of the history of RWBY .
' I have a feeling that we will be short with big assets'. - ElizjumGarden3mthReplied to P_J_Sch
So as not to reveal too much . It will still take some time before it happens . First Kurumi will adapt to her current powers , over time the range of her abilities and understanding her skills will lead her to unlock a greater range of her powers .
' I have a feeling that we will be short with big assets'. - ElizjumGarden3mthReplied to Fabianoobinho
Thank you so much for reading and positively reviewing my story .As for the problem of updating chapters , this is mainly due to my need to pay attention to past chapters to carefully stick to the details and facts previously given . After all , I don't want the story to suddenly stop matching the information given earlier . Then I need to write carefully to get the story right , if I do it wrong the story may lose coherence , sense or even plot . While writing I also have to pay attention to whether the story does not become boring or monotonous , which is sometimes very hard for me to say due to the fact that I know the whole plot . Which makes it hard for me to evoke any reaction to what happens in the chapter . For the reasons given above , just writing chapters takes me two to three days . Which can sometimes extend depending on my work schedule . The next big problem is translating and correcting errors or inconsistencies in finished chapters . That due to the fact that I am not an English speaker , I have to use a translator . It is for these reasons that it takes me a week , at full dedicationto , write a chapter . Not forgetting that , due to the fact that in addition to this fan fiction I am writing another , drags the deadline for the update to two weeks .
- ElizjumGarden3mthReplied to Fabianoobinho
- ElizjumGarden5mthReplied to Sugarsaga
Not true ....... I give a like to a comment , to make the person writing it aware that I have read and taken to heart their message. As for replying to them ...... Well sometimes I have no idea how to respond or I think there is no need to respond .
Hearing my own voice next to my ear , I feel as if physically someone is leaning on my shoulder to whisper these words to me . Seeing out of the corner of my eye a black shadow with blue eyes . I thought no more and angrily with a quick movement I slap Blake's outstretched hand , then catching her neck in my hands , I tightened my grip . Feeling my nails gently digging into her neck , I felt her warm blood gently run down my rain-cold hands and then I lost myself again , but now I saw only red . Red that consume my gray world . - ElizjumGarden6mthReplied to TastyPickle00
Sorry about that , I honestly don't know why I wrote it that way . I will correct it .
Cali : " You love Lappland and she loves you . If it was different it would have to be resolved differently , because I could not force you to love someone . But what you are doing now will destroy not only your life but the life of Lappland , which I will not allow you to do because I love you both . I raised you to be a model of a true member of the white fang , not a terrorist but someone fighting for freedom , someone brave and proud in expressing who they are and what they believe in and stand for . Not a coward who runs away from every problem she is afraid to solve , hiding behind everything she can . " - ElizjumGarden6mthReplied to Kurama24
Yes
Vale city the capital of the kingdom of Vale at first glance many well-kept streets and general location give a relative sense of security . However, only those who have lived in the city long enough will understand that behind these everyday lively , clean and colorful streets are hidden those dark dirty and at first glance abandoned . - ElizjumGarden7mthReplied to SugerSaga
I honestly thought so too but according to the wiki they are amber in colour .
Her pale skin so close to minę. The feeling of contact between our naked bodies . I can smell her scent feel her warmth . I look into that silver eyes I see only the reflection of my violet ones . - ElizjumGarden7mthReplied to The_Dark_Hydrax
Thank you for your reviews. As for dropping this fan fiction it is unlikely to happen until I make it clear . If there are no chapters for a long time it simply means that I have no time or that something has happened, but generally I will write about it. If I did not write anything and updates would not appear on this fan fiction and on my other fan fiction . It just means that I am dead ...... I will not abandon this fan fiction as well as my other fan fiction because I have fun writing them .As for the mulitverse part of Kurumi and Neo's journey I was planning to do it sometime when both Kurumi and Neo are 18 - 19 years old which means it would be sometime after Vytal Festival . However, things may change because I'm working on the basis of some plot situations I've already planned . The rest of the story is going on to get to those given points in the story. Well ultimately it will be a long fan fiction . Just the way I like them .
- ElizjumGarden7mthCommentedCh 32 Nightmares, Vulnerability and a boring match
- ElizjumGarden8mthReplied to CrystalEnBoite
It can be interpreted this way . But as for what exactly happened it will be explained in future chapters .
'Again the same recurring nightmare . I have had it since I can remember . Although I don't remember what happens in it but I still feel strangely connected to it .' - ElizjumGarden8mthReplied to Haku_Ouroboros
After finishing this thread / mission ( I don't know how to call it ) there will be maybe one more chapter ( I don't know how it will come out in chapters / number of words . I don't want the chapters to be too long ) So maybe let's safely assume three - four chapters .
Ch 51 A night full of nightmares 3 - ElizjumGarden9mthReplied to Reeleyplan
All I can say is Yes .
I think while looking at this troublesome yet joyful little family. Maybe it is because of the sentiment that a memory appears in my head and in it a golden-haired woman looks at me with those beautiful eyes of hers. And in her arms she holds a little baby with black hair and eyes just like mine.