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Shoomoon
ShoomoonLv122yr
2022-08-29 22:20

Interesting to read, definitely has a good foundation for the future and can see it improve even more over time. Can't wait to see more and what you have in store author [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Survive as long as you can!!

Maryam_Mayo
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25 Chs

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Maryam_Mayo
Maryam_MayoAuthor

I'm glad you liked this.

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Maryam_Mayo
Maryam_MayoAuthor

Hey viewers, hope you guys are doing well, it's my first piece of work, I would love to know how this novel makes you feel like, and do let me know about my mistakes or anything, and last but not the least I will wait for your suggestions. 😊

2yr

Anam_Siddiqui_0786
Anam_Siddiqui_0786Lv1

It's my first time to read a horror story. I just read first chapter and I don't know what attracted me to read further and further. The story line is awsome and amazing. The best thing that I noticed in this writing is that the author's style of depiction, as it seems like the author writes the story in a flow, I mean the concepts are in the mind and the author depicted them as they are without any exaggeration or extra spices. We learn from our mistakes and you are improving with every new chapter. I am really impressed with the influential writing, storyline, characters depiction and even the title is attention gaining. Keep it up and you will shine as a shinning star.

2yr
moaz_coc
moaz_cocLv1

concept is really good It was a huge horror, don't add so much horror, it seems like it has a good concept You just got a little grammar mistake, it was horror and funny and upload the chapter.keep growing

2yr
AYESHA_FAHIM
AYESHA_FAHIMLv1

Wow, this novel really grabbed my attention; all of the characters created by the author are enthralling. I'm reading this novel at night, and it's giving me goosebumps. I particularly like Kavin, who is both sweet and mysterious. I've already saved it to my library. A nice work author

2yr
Jaison_Arbor
Jaison_ArborLv2

The story is really good 🤧 I was hooked, the author has done a really good job in describing everything, the suspense and mystery is my favorite, good job author🍃

2yr
RomanceFanatic028
RomanceFanatic028Lv4

I love to read about horror things. The story you wrote was very captivating. I couldn't stop myself from reading further. The writing is also very simple that's why it was easy to read. I am looking forward for reading more.

2yr
PerkyPompous_Pixie
PerkyPompous_PixieLv4

Great book, great writing and superb character development. This novel is captivating and gripping, I usually don't read this kind of book, but this one is attention-grabbing, with excellent Idea and plot.

2yr
daniz_
daniz_Lv3

Wow. The story is really nice. I didn't expect it to be this interesting. I thought it might be boring after reading the first paragraph, but my mind changed as soon as I read a little bit more. Keep up the good work, author!

2yr
LIGht_Pen
LIGht_PenLv12

nice story author, I actually enjoy horror story and this story encouraged me to keep on reading. I do hope nothing happens to kevin though. nice work author

2yr
Isha_24
Isha_24Lv1

JUST WOW!! I really like this story .... as story develops further it feels like what next... what next ? what will happen now ? Your writing skills is awesome .

2yr
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