Item: Survive as long as you can!!
Rating: 5
Author: Anam_Siddiqui_0786

Anam_Siddiqui_0786Lv12yr

2022-08-29 01:15

It's my first time to read a horror story. I just read first chapter and I don't know what attracted me to read further and further. The story line is awsome and amazing. The best thing that I noticed in this writing is that the author's style of depiction, as it seems like the author writes the story in a flow, I mean the concepts are in the mind and the author depicted them as they are without any exaggeration or extra spices. We learn from our mistakes and you are improving with every new chapter. I am really impressed with the influential writing, storyline, characters depiction and even the title is attention gaining. Keep it up and you will shine as a shinning star.

Survive as long as you can!!

Maryam_Mayo

4.7

25 Chs

Liked by 7 people

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Maryam_MayoAuthor

Thanks, for writing such a delightful comment. 🙃

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AYESHA_FAHIMLv1

Yeah, you are right. I was just thinking that the author has the ability to write everything in a fluid manner. I was just wondering if the author has a mind.

2yr

Maryam_MayoAuthor

baz aa

AYESHA_FAHIM:Yeah, you are right. I was just thinking that the author has the ability to write everything in a fluid manner. I was just wondering if the author has a mind.

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Anam_Siddiqui_0786Lv1

Hahaha

AYESHA_FAHIM:Yeah, you are right. I was just thinking that the author has the ability to write everything in a fluid manner. I was just wondering if the author has a mind.

2yr

Maryam_MayoAuthor

Keep reading.

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Anam_Siddiqui_0786Lv1

Yes, I'm

Maryam_Mayo:Keep reading.

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Maryam_MayoAuthor

do read chp 14

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Anam_Siddiqui_0786Lv1

I desperately wait for new chapters

Anam_Siddiqui_0786:Yes, I'm

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Maryam_MayoAuthor

I will upload soon

Anam_Siddiqui_0786:I desperately wait for new chapters

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Anam_Siddiqui_0786Lv1

Of course, I'll

Maryam_Mayo:do read chp 14

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Anam_Siddiqui_0786Lv1

You are doing a great job

Maryam_Mayo: Thanks, for writing such a delightful comment. 🙃

2yr

Anam_Siddiqui_0786Lv1

🙃

Maryam_Mayo:I will upload soon

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Maryam_MayoAuthor

thanks for your feedback

Anam_Siddiqui_0786:You are doing a great job

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Anam_Siddiqui_0786Lv1

🙃

Maryam_Mayo:thanks for your feedback

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Anam_Siddiqui_0786Lv1

When will upload further chapters??

Maryam_Mayo:thanks for your feedback

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Anam_Siddiqui_0786Lv1

You*

Anam_Siddiqui_0786:When will upload further chapters??

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Anam_Siddiqui_0786Lv1

I noticed another thing in your writing dear author

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Maryam_MayoAuthor

and what is that?

Anam_Siddiqui_0786:I noticed another thing in your writing dear author

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Maryam_MayoAuthor

I would love to know

Anam_Siddiqui_0786:I noticed another thing in your writing dear author

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Maryam_MayoAuthor

umm, Can't tell you exact time, probably at night...

Anam_Siddiqui_0786:You*

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