Review Detail of Time_Alter in Overlord: Dreadful Pride

Item: Overlord: Dreadful Pride
Rating: 4.2

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Time_AlterLv48mthTime_Alter

Ok I love the story so far but the only thing is I was confused in the beginning on who the mc was i thought it was the half dragon guy but it the elf guy. Also how you introduce the mc made him very unlike able to me

Overlord: Dreadful Pride

BoombaTheSaint

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BoombaTheSaintAuthorBoombaTheSaint

That was the entire point of it. The mc was more of cold realist, bordering on sociopathic. I made him so in order to give a visible impression of flavour text on personality. I’m glad you find the fic entertaining.

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