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2024-02-13 16:27

the chapters are good, no info dump, fast paced and interesting !!!! webnovel is dead if this novel is not ranked among top books, lol 😆 kudos to you, author

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Thank you for the sweet review

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World setting: Very realistic and on point. I could easily see this as either an anime or tv series. It was cute and very well described. I was somewhat confused about why the FL had to run away and I was lost a bit on how easy it was for her to leave everything behind. I would have loved a little more explanation. However, I could vividly see the characters place of work and the stairway of kissing. All in all the world setting flowed very well. 4 stars Character design and development: The author gave chapter one as a descriptor of her characters. I thought this unique and a good way to keep readers up to date on her characters. Sadly, I did find myself looking for more descriptions of the characters inside the actual chapters though. And then I became super excited when I got one as the author does explain things well when details are given. The progression and the back and forth between the FL and ML was great! So although I wished for a bit more detail sometimes, the Development won this section. 5 stars Plot: As I only read 10 chapters I can’t say for certain what my thoughts are regarding plot. This story has great potential however and I’m excited to see where it goes. With only the first 10 chapters in mind, 5 stars. Writing style: What I normally have issues with, when it comes to novels on WebNovel is the sentence and word structure. I have a hard time getting past chapter one normally. While there were some areas that this happened, it was pretty mild. Sadly, the author does tend to suffer from mild Repetition. The author reused the same words several times. As an example, the word ‘idea’ was used 3 times in a short three sentence paragraph and a total of 13 times in one chapter. This is an easy fix however and just takes a bit of work to rectify. One last thing in this section, the author worked the end of the chapter into the beginning of the next chapter. So it was a constant repeat at the beginning of the chapter. It’s a bit off putting that they repeat the last scene, in the beginning of each new chapter. (See what I did here? Lol) It makes me want to skip paragraphs. For this I have to give this section 3 stars. Overall: it’s a great read. While there were some moments that could use editing and a bit of rework, the story itself and its character progression were beautiful. I’ve added it to my read list and will continue when I’ve found some more time. There were simple things that I truly enjoyed. As an example, the author used the characters of her book to explain why things were in English. I thought this was very smooth and a very smart way to explain the English transition while they’re in a different country. Overall, I’m happy with this novel and it gets 4.25 out of 5 stars.

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